My Heartbroken Runaway

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  1. RobberBaron said:

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    This is for a friend who's going through some rough times. It sounds really weird when read as lyrics, but once I perfect the music I'll upload it and you can see how it should sound. This song is in C minor.

    My Heartbroken Runaway - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011

    [Verse]

    When you look back, at this time of life,
    What will you say?

    Please don't laugh my friend,
    Cos I know you want to cry

    I promise, I'll be there,
    I will take the pain away

    I don't have, the answers,
    But this much I can say

    [Pre-Chorus]

    You shouldn't have to live life like this,
    Remember, I'll be there to guide you to the light

    [Chorus]

    Give me your hand and I will take you to a better place,
    Where nobody can hurt you,
    I'll understand if you want to take it out on me,
    Rather me than you, you see

    I'll keep your secrets for you,
    I'll never go away,
    Don't you know you're safe with me,
    My little heartbroken runaway

    [Verse]

    Your father, is in pain,
    And he takes it out on you

    Your mother, is at work,
    And you're left to feed the crew

    Just 14, what happened?
    Your life is out of line

    But I know it'll get better,
    Oh just give it some time

    [Pre-Chorus]

    You shouldn't have to live life like this,
    Remember, I'll be there to guide you to the light

    [Chorus]

    Give me your hand and I will take you to a better place,
    Where nobody can hurt you,
    I'll understand if you want to take it out on me,
    Rather me than you, you see

    I'll keep your secrets for you,
    I'll never go away,
    Don't you know you're safe with me,
    My little heartbroken runaway

    [Bridge]

    How do you do it,
    Carry on?
    I know I never could,
    You must be strong

    Not just outside,
    But in your soul,
    You're a fighter,
    That's for sure

    Listen to me my friend,
    It's not your fault,
    You'll reach your dreams one day,
    Just remember what I said

    [Chorus]

    Give me your hand and I will take you to a better place,
    Where nobody can hurt you,
    I'll understand if you want to take it out on me,
    Rather me than you, you see

    I'll keep your secrets for you,
    I'll never go away,
    Don't you know you're safe with me,
    My little heartbroken runaway
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    This applies to too many people... I can imagine it's beautiful...
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  3. RobberBaron said:

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    Yes, I imagine lots of it can be applied to many people I know. I've nearly finished the soundtrack, but I don't like it anymore, it's a bit too poppy. Even though this doesn't rhyme all that much, it fits with the music and I think I'm going to write songs like this more often. Thank you for your comment.
     
  4. RobberBaron said:

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    This went really weird and I don't like it and I might start all over again, but here goes: http://www.robberbaron.host.hk-diy.n...%20Runaway.mp3