Fade to Black- reviews and critiques appreciated :)

Fade to Black

V1: There's nothing left for you to say
And yet you're here and still you stay
Our love has gone and went away
Cause I can't take the games you play...

(Chorus)
Cause all has been forsaken,
Love don't live here anymore
All hope had has been taken,
And now i'm closing the door
Now the lights have all gone out,
And now there's no turning back
Faith's been broken, there's no doubt,
As your heart... fades to black...

V2: So many things I didn't say
Now missing words are in the way
I have to go, no I won't stay
Cause I won't take the games you play...

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
wooo... Won't you listen to me
Now that midnight is at hand
wooo... We here the clock striking
Now it's time to start the band

One dance and after that...
It'll all... fade to black......

(Chorus- repeat 3x- End)

Copyright 2010- SJ.Stevens

I like it. Flows right along. I like the "games you play" thing. Excellent!

Thanks very much!