Scratch

Let me know your opinions..I'm not sure my what I think of this yet so be brutally honest please..

I feel as if
I am just a story
No eternal light
Or everlasting glory

A scratch in time
Of the world's perception
But a tragedy
To my mind's deception

Meant for brilliance
Destined for nothing
My body's resilience
Holds a heart so pleading

But just scratch..
Just a scratch
My brilliant soul
Is just a scratch

I feel as if
I am just a nightmare
A blood thirsty soul
A mother's worst scare

But just a scratch
Just a scratch
My blood thirsty soul
Is just a scratch

A scratch in time
Of the world's perception
But a tragedy
To my mind's deception

Meant for brilliance
Destined for nothing
My body's resilience
Holds a heart so misleading

But just a scratch
Just a scratch
A scratch in this world
I am just a scratch.

(c) 2011
r4r

I'm not sure if

"A scratch in time
Of the world's perception
But a tragedy
To my mind's deception"

is needed a second time??