Love the way You lie rap redo - Jfam

Well, im back (and i find i say this a lot) with another rap. This time ive decided i might be good enough to cover and eminem ft. Rihanna song so jere's my re-write to Love the Way You Lie, two verses

(Verse 1)

I can't tell you what you mean to me, let me say it once more
I try to spit the words out but can never play an encore
You got me trapped, and I'll never get back again: and I depend
More than ever on your lies to me, I can't see reality,
You're grabbing me, the door lies in front of me but I can never leave you,
Astoundingly, I come right back again, once again I find myself
Blindedly, Crazily defying gravity
I'm always getting pulled back; no matter what I try to be
It's time for change, that's what they keep telling me
Religiously, preach to me, telling me the right things, Seemingly
My personality, always overrides them, shunted like a madman
Their lines are always dead to me, listen in forgetfully
Every time ignored it, never heard the advice
Thought about it one time, kicked it out the door twice
That's my life, casually ignored; ain't I ever thinking?
Hopes are ever sinking, was I ever thinking?

(Verse 3)
Pray for me, I could never leave you, wishful
You're my world, you took me to my breakthrough, painful
I'm never gonna lie, I wanna say goodbye but I can't
You stop me. It's like I'm shy, fifteen again
Bliss again, how the time flies by when it's fun again
Just content, playing just for play's sake, running
Just to run then it all turned round again, shattered in
Pieces, smashed like a mirror, gave me bad luck
Set me up with your crap, I was there to fall back
You caught me, I trusted you, wanted you to stay back
You're like my map, led me to the right place
Shame I didn't read you, I fell for the wrong face
It was a disaster, wish I'd never met you
seen you, my life just went from bad to worse, damn
Put you first, blatantly the wrong choice, scam
You took my voice, so I'm just gonna...

Random question, um.... What happened to verse 2?

Yeah, I realised that after I posted it. Verse 3 is verse 2 I typoed a 3 in place of the 2, whoops...

Not bad man... for you not to be Eminem....
You have balls trying to spit on a song like that. But anything can improve with Perseverance....You have a gift man.. Stick to it and you will be successful...good drop...Kid

Thanks man. I thought I'd give it a go seeing as I thought the beat was pretty good