What should I call this?

Spend our life, on the border line
With love on one side
I’ve pulled you before over to the right
But never far enough
It’s never far enough

So take one good look at what's in front of you
open up your eyes do what you want to do
We are restless souls in a struggle
And it’s all because one heart fell in love

I’m the one holding on
Are you worth the wait?
You dance with me
Murder my misery
The world just slips away
and the love kick starts again

So take one good look at what's in front of you
open up your eyes do what you want to do
Cause my man you’re someone else’s man
And that ain’t the man that I wanna want, but you
Keep pulling me back in with your beautiful words
With your arm around me, man how it hurts
Cuz I forget that you’re hers, then I fall back to earth
We are restless souls in a struggle
And it’s all because one heart fell in love

I want you to know
I’ll be there to catch you if she lets go

Here I am still hanging on
But I’m terrified you’ll leave me behind
If I lost you I’d die, I would die
Cause I survive
on the breath you are finished with

So take one good look at what's in front of you
open up your eyes do what you want to do
We are restless souls in a struggle
And it’s all because one heart fell in love

Holding on? Idk but I like this. Keep up the good work.

I can think of 3 different names .



#1 (Threshold To Destiny)
This it the beginning AKA (Threshold) of a beautiful relationship.
How you say in your song you are there for him waiting for his full attention he loves you but he is pulled another way. not sure of his (destiny), He don't know what he's missing. He has to make that decision to take that final step through that door. (Destiny) aka your heart.

#2 ( Fatal Distraction)
He is killing your heart it is ripping you to shreds deadly terms to the end of your love for him and him for you. AKA( Fatal)
and the whole reason for this is the (distraction) he is having with another female.

#3(Forsaken Hearts)
You feel abandoned and used he has( forsaken) you in some way or another. (hearts) aka your relationship.. or both of you feel the same. you can't wait for him forever he needs to make up his mind or he will feel (Forsaken) once he realizes what he has let go.

There are so many names you could name this. Beutiful song by the way. Very sad, with a hint of happiness and well expressed...
great job on this...I hope this helps...

Thanks for the suggestions! I think i'm going to call this The Borderline because the song started with the idea of always being on the borderline in between two things.

That good too. lol Sorry i just get really deep into detail when it come to song names. I like your song it's a very nice piece...

Great lyrics. I love line "Murder my misery" Nice one!

Browsing again....It makes me feel like a kid in a candy store reading all those old threads. I wonder what has happened to them. Are some of them set to music, recorded, published? This is a song I came across I particularly like. It hit me because of its direct emotionality and its clarity. It might have been an unpublished Adele-song. I think 'One Heart' would have been a good title 'cause it occurs in the final line of the chorus. (Maybe 'Because One Heart' but that depends on the melody)

Originally Posted by Peter Both

Browsing again....It makes me feel like a kid in a candy store reading all those old threads. I wonder what has happened to them. Are some of them set to music, recorded, published? This is a song I came across I particularly like. It hit me because of its direct emotionality and its clarity. It might have been an unpublished Adele-song. I think 'One Heart' would have been a good title 'cause it occurs in the final line of the chorus. (Maybe 'Because One Heart' but that depends on the melody)

Peter,while looking up older threads is very cool,you might check to see the author last post.This writer last post was on this thread back on 06/23/2011.I'd look up threads that the writer might respond to or appreciate.After a year and a half..........they've flown the coop.