This is lovely. I really like the imagery and some of the lyrics are superb. For example "I will voice magical words
those of great enchanters" - I really love that line!
It seems a bit scattered in form - I can't really get a rhythm going in my head - but I'm sure you know how it goes
I would assume, though of course I may be wrong, that the middle section is the chorus and that you're possibly calling it "This Other Kingdom" or something related?
"If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."