what do you think about lyrics ?

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    bidoune said: 07-06-2011 02:28 AM

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    Well, it's not finished!!!

    thanks
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    Katie13 said: 07-06-2011 09:46 AM

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    This is lovely. I really like the imagery and some of the lyrics are superb. For example "I will voice magical words
    those of great enchanters    " - I really love that line!
    It seems a bit scattered in form - I can't really get a rhythm going in my head - but I'm sure you know how it goes
    I would assume, though of course I may be wrong, that the middle section is the chorus and that you're possibly calling it "This Other Kingdom" or something related?
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     

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    bidoune said: 07-07-2011 02:49 AM

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    Hello Katie 13,
    thank you for your message