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  1. Tre_fly's Avatar

    Tre_fly said:

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    Yo, so this is how its gonna go: I post a quick freestyle, then after that, Ima put a subject (please refrain from ridiculously stupid subjects, lets be a little mature/intelligent here) and the next person to post raps about the subject that I posted, and so on.

    Keep the rhyming to 4-12 bars unless you feel your absolutely gonna kill the subject, then feel free to do however many you think you can kill. Be as creative as possible. And remember to leave a subject at the end.

    Leggo

    I cut lanes, dont switch em, Ima switchblade
    Got memory imprints from where the swisher laid
    this swiss made weed raid leaves me high top fade-d
    and as I say-this, we raised it and stayed "it"
    (Idk how much you'll understand that but whatever)

    Next Subject: Your ultimate dream/aspiration
    get it
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
  2. charles reese said:

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    i dream of a big house
    rooms with flat screens
    walkin on the stage
    tryin 2 decipher the fans screams
    are they proud of me
    or just happy cuz im famous
    when you ask me about my dreams
    ill tell you thats what my aim is

    next subject: motivation
  3. quickill said:

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    I could use a vacation
    Workin till my brain bursts
    Yeah I got that motivation
    Remember back in old times
    At the bus stop steady waitin
    Man I switched my life around
    Ya I know it's aggrivatin

    But push on man till your dreams come true
    If they put a wall up you just go and push through
    First they don't give a **** then they learn to hate you
    No matter what no matter when just never let em break you

    Instead you let hate inspire
    Every time they hold you down
    You just lift your arms higher
    Even when you fallin down
    You just keep those guns blazin
    That's why they'll never keep you down
    Because you got that motivation

    Next topic: Police
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Just like in Grand Theft Auto, killin pigs is my motto
    I give cops an Odd Future like them Bacon Boys
    they gettin paranormal heart attacks, white noise
    from the guns I use to dispose and impose a written will with every kill

    Next Topic: How music affects you
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
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    Zarex said:

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    Music is my life so if I'm blessed can God write?
    Listening to these buds, makes me green with envy, no strife
    Kill the game, not a gamer but fingers say that I'm Legendary
    Reach for my dreams, but it seems the dust came from a fairy

    line 2 & 4 will be slept on but is all good

    next topic: high school drop out
    Live a good, noble life and pay no attention as to whether gods exist. If they are just, they will judge you for your virtuous life, not your worship.
  6. quickill said:

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    Used to think I'd grow to be somethin
    Teacher told me shut up cuz I'm never gonna see nuttin
    Plus that bish illiterate I shoulda seen it by the syllabus
    Assignment for the first day. nu nu nunununu... ish
    Man you gotta be kiddin me tell me what I do next
    Slave through this high school then four more years of college
    Just so I can get your shitty job teachin all the kids this nonsense
    How you define success you think it's all so obvious
    But I won't play by these rules
    Fourteen an droppin outta school

    First day I'm sleepin in don't even gotta cut class
    Drive by my old middle school spray paint "bish lick my azz"
    Busted by the cops they said son you are a truant
    I told em piggies suck my prick you d*ck cuz school is what I'm through with

    next topic: fear
  7. Mr.SuperDuper said:

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    I don't know if I will awake from my sleep,
    I can't tell the wolf from the sheep,
    I don't feel safe at the Bus, when I'm alone,
    Constantly in the danger zone,
    Can't tell if I pushed a man to far,
    Fear leaves a mental scar,
    I'm scared of the Klu Klux Klan,
    Scared for my brother in Iran,
    Scared when I bombed a test,
    When I hear voices that should be in rest,
    I'm scared of what people are thinking of,
    I'm scared when I think that I am not loved,
    Fear enevlopes me, even when it rains,
    I feel a very unusual pain,
    Then my town just had a flood,
    In my hand is a pool of blood,
    I'm scared of what can't be explained,
    But the fear keeps me from being shamed,
    Because fear fuels my greatest ambition,
    Supplies adrenaline, my body's ammunition

    next topic: What you take pride in
    Last edited by Mr.SuperDuper; 07-15-2011 at 07:28 AM. Reason: Forgot to add next topic
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    Man that sucks,
    I wrote all this for nothing. lol looks like Mr. Super beat me to it.
    F*** It, I'm posting it anyway.
    my topic on fear.


    Fear is just an emotion we all feel like love and hate.
    my worst fear is drowning ,and left in a vegetative state.
    or burning like a witch at the stake .hell even a swarm of bee's,
    or raking up leaves and finding a poisons snake.
    counting sheep laying in bed wide awake.
    trying to get over the phobias ,Some things I can't take,
    can't escape,when Karma's got you by the balls,
    you can't see her, she's just hiding in the walls.
    like paranormal activity, orbs floating down the halls.
    the past keeps coming back, raining on you like squalls.
    with in your proximity, he's lurking around the corner.
    Death can have you if he wants you, nothings watching over ya.
    no guardian angles ,too busy being jealous of us.
    fighting wars in heaven, Cause they think they're better than us.
    God gave us a soul, and left them soulless and empty.
    green eyed with envy like Gabriel the Ark angle, our arch enemy.
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
  9. Mr.SuperDuper said:

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    lol SK'n, I've read your posts and you are good, so your lyrics probably count over mine if people think yours are better ( I am to tired to read it all, haven't slept at all)

    P.S. Are you guys writing your lines before? Maybe that's why mine suck, I just did that off the dome
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    I have found a new job so now I can't sit on my pc writing all the time. So what I did was write a few lines here and there over time until I completed the verse. I was almost finished this morning and I went to post. And there you was posted before me. lol
    talk about your all time back fires. This one blew up in my face,J/K
    It doesn't matter who's better in my book. And your rhymes don't suck man..I just spent more time on mine. some of my rhymes that you have read, most likely took me a while to do. I rewrite more than my share of lyrics before I post them. I must have OCD or something.
    Nope that can't be true cause ,Monk would have a heart attack if he stepped foot in my house. J/K
    as far as the post I think people will understand. And I'm pretty sure they would have done the same as me.
    Get some sleep Man...so you can feel super-duper tomorrow.
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
  11. Tre_fly's Avatar

    Tre_fly said:

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    I usually read the post or whatever and then take like twenty or thirty minutes just comin up with **** off the top of my dome. Idk about everybody else. I refine what I put a little bit and then post. It usually takes me at most thirty minutes to create a reply or rap on a topic, that is, if it is 12 bars or more. It only takes like 5 minutes for like 4 bars.
    "What we think, we become." Buddha
  12. Mr.SuperDuper said:

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    When I said off the dome, I just wrote stuff down as i thought ( although i took atleast like 20 Seconds for each line)
    But still tre i like your lines, i wish i thought to write stuff like dat
  13. quickill said:

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    I got a good girl
    And she a sweetheart
    I got a bad girl
    And she real dark
    Straight nasty
    Fantastic
    But don't blame me
    You'd do the same thing
    If you could dude
    So don't hate me

    All my old girls
    Loved em so much
    Except them dirty b*tches
    They can get ****ed
    I ain't a player though
    I'm just lucky
    Cuz all these fine girls
    Who once loved me
    For every one of them
    There's prolly two more
    It's hard to envy you
    When I could steal your girl

    So I don't care
    If you rich or what
    I'm prolly wit yo girl
    And she's gettin ****ed
    You don't phase me
    And you never will
    Cuz my bedroom
    It's so unreal


    next topic: ex-girlfriends
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    Molotova said:

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    Since I'm a chick, I'll rap about ex-boyfriends.

    Talkin' about ex boyfriends as if I employ men
    Used to have a marine toy and I was like ahoy then
    Yet it didn't last and the past can flash back so fast
    Now his xss outlasts so much longer than I asked

    Then I attached to this rich little son of a bxtch
    He had a scratch for every itch & knew I would twitch
    every single bill out of that ATM
    We mingled, chilled out and at 8 PM

    I already took the moolah, ran with a driver named Abdulah
    Just call me the rulah (ruler), 'cuz no one plays it coolah (cooler)


    Next topic: Phoney friends
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  15. quickill said:

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    Had a friend named Phil
    **** was unreal
    Tried to steal my car and then my girl
    Had a friend named Tony
    That ***** was so phony
    Tried to run up on me as if he had known me
    Had a girl named Mellisa now she was a trip
    Til I found out she was ridin on everybody's ****
    Had a bro named Marvin / Who was always startin
    **** but the trick was / He wasn't equipped cuz
    Lost a lotta friends for stupid reasons
    But half of em fake I didn't even need em
    They out of my vision like I ain't ever seen em
    Hate to see em fail / But I don't got time for this
    That's why I can't hang with people who are fake as **** yup

    Next topic: guilt
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    The People always say live with no regret
    The steeple says forgive and forget.
    This needle will misgive a perfect portrait.
    Its lethal ill is furtive in my conscience shortcut.

    It will supply a high that will lie to my ethics
    It won't ask why I comply to a life that's prosthetic
    But the low will bask in the karmatic pain I obtain, I need a medic.
    Cut the show, I'll mask the traumatic disdain I gain, I feel pathetic.

    I know Mistakes are to be made in this cinema
    I wish outtakes were played in my dilemma
    Like A blooper that's displayed before my credit is gone
    But Your a trooper, you've stayed even though my **** goes on.


    Rusty, but oh well
    Next Topic: Evil
    Last edited by Zachre; 07-18-2011 at 02:03 PM.
  17. quickill said:

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    I thought I knew the feeling
    Never superstitious
    She showed me her true colors
    That **** was so revealin
    Turned out so vicious
    And I was so surprised how could it end so poorly
    Rob cheat and steal main topics of the story
    I could give you details but I'd rather spare ya
    But sick was her game she didn't really care nah
    Disguised as a dime but she's ****in with my mind
    Got out just in time even though it went sour
    Plottin on my **** up until her final hour
    Sicker than Hitler with a gun in a tower
    Evil was her name and I had to go without her

    Next topic: day dreaming
  18. LightHeaded said:

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    I think I've been daydreaming way too much
    To know if its a dream or real I have to reach out and touch
    Cant tell if its a dream or real life
    Last thing I remember i was 25 with a hot *ss wife

    Thinking if I pinch myself I'll awake
    But I'm daydreaming all of that was fake
    Time to come back to reality
    On the news there's another fatality

    My daydreams are better than real life
    For goodness sake I got an ugly *ss wife

    next topic: overcoming obstacles in life
  19. quickill said:

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    k kind of a unique flow to this one...

    [talking]
    Yeah... they told us we were never gonna be **** with this attitude. Well guess what b*tches

    [verse]
    Sittin on the curb waitin for my ride
    Everytime I see em I die a lil more inside
    Flossin, ballin but they never put in work
    Makin minimum wage and my boss is such a jerk
    But I'll make it past this one day
    Save your excuses
    Went and turned ruthless
    Nothin but grind
    And you have the nerve to ask me why I'm workin all the time?
    Went to waitin in line to VIP access
    No TV to Direct Access
    Servin drinks to free bottle service
    So you can suck my d*ck if you ever called me worthless
    Busted *** car now I'm peelin out the dealership
    But I know I deserve it after all my hardships
    Everything they said
    Never really meant sh*t
    And if you were alive I know you'd throw your hands up
    But since they took your life I'll rep enough for both of us
    Made it from the top to the bottom
    But I'm far from there
    Feel like I just started
    They already can't compare
    Truth is you will never measure up
    No title no money you will never impress us
    Cuz we're... aimin for the higher road
    Even once slung dro was a long time ago
    Yeah I ain't frontin call me an animal
    Released from my cage so get out the way
    The haters that doubted me
    Well you helped me pave the way
    So anytime I'mma see you I'mma look at you and say
    Just keep on hatin cuz it won't get in my way *****!


    next topic: 420
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    Tre_fly said:

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    Hahah quickill good topic. hahahahaa
    Anyways,

    Long day with classes and dealin with the masses; time for relaxin
    nearly 4:20 now; I dont know how I; almost missed it
    Open my Aleve, pull out the trees and proceed to roll it
    Dancing in the greenery and grooming my gardens scenery
    No sticks, no seeds, clean weed is what I anoint
    To a blunt, a joint, a bowl, Im at my tipping point
    "Hows the air up there?" cloudy, clear, and i'm drifting outta the atmosphere
    hahaahahah

    Hmmmmm next topic: love i guess
    "What we think, we become." Buddha