Love Will Remain

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  1. writer1 said:

    Default Love Will Remain

    To love me is to help me
    To be with me is to see me
    Love is equal, all can agree
    We were two but now we are three

    Our love is strong
    Don’t want us to play along
    Sing from the heart, this is our song
    Time together must not be short, last all day long

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    So let us dance and sing tonight
    Let me be your honorable knight
    Violins can be heard, sounds just right
    Dance on the beach, as if taking flight

    Air, so warm with a slight breeze
    Air deflected from tall palm trees
    Music from sound systems and many CD’s
    Everyone came for the fun, none displeased

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    We danced all night and rested on the sand
    We kissed, and kissed while holding hands
    We promised each other, there will be no demands
    We will listen well, we both will understand

    We feel the sun through our thin clothes
    To be with each other, anything goes
    I walked to a flower stand, to hand her a rose
    Soon I will do what is right, propose

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    I walked over to the stand, gave her a glass of wine
    Others noticed me coming; now there is no line
    I know now she has no others, she is mine
    Our love now will test the sands of time

    Wine is gone and she wants no more
    If she did, no more to pour
    We spoke of love and peace, we both swore
    We know now, in our life there will be four

    Air, so warm with a slight breeze
    Air deflected from tall palm trees
    Music from sound systems and many CD’s
    Everyone came for the fun, none displeased

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    We danced all night and rested on the sand
    We kissed, and kissed while holding hands
    We promised each other, there will be no demands
    We will listen well, we both will understand

    Love is strong, meant to last
    Can I have more wine, not an empty glass
    This place will be a thing of the past
    Another time perhaps, more in mass

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released

    Chorus
    My love is strong; I want to be at peace
    Never want our love to cease
    Love is permanent, not for lease
    I remain in love, not to be released
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    I think this is really good. I like the story, and the chorus is great. This line in particular - "I remain in love, not to be released" - really works. However, it seems a little long. Maybe it isn't with music, or maybe that's just me
    Nice work.
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."