The Long Treck Home (Metal song)

Hello. Tell me what you think of the lyrics.


At First, We lived, To dine, on the Native Life,
And now, We halt, To see what they have done.
While We, Have Watched, In Silence,
From our tired Fortress,
They, Have built, Armies, Miles around.
We Sit, Blank Faces, To Watch The Carnage Set Out,
With No One Holding Either Back.


But Now, We See, The Error Of Our Ways,
So, We Move, On A Boat Heading Off-Course To Sea,
And So, We Imbark, And Try,
The Long Trek Back Home.

Weeks In, The People Begin, To Feel That We Had Made A Mistake,
What Was It We Felt We Had Done Wrong?
Was It The Constant Killing Of Innocent People,
Or The Constant Ignoring Of It That Made Us Slowly Become Insane?
What Was It That Made Us Hate Them Then?
Why Do We Feel Sympathy For A Hated Peoples?

But Now, We See, The Error Of Our Ways,
So, We Move, On A Boat Heading Off-Course To Sea,
And So, We Imbark, And Try,
The Long Trek Back Home.

But Now, We Head, To Die, Once More,
For A Life That We Had Left Behind.
But Was It Too Late?
Had The Damage Been Done To The Homeland?
There Was No Time To Check,
With The Sick And Elderly, And Children Dying,
We Had A Firm Understanding Of What Karma Meant.

And So That Night We Cried...
And So That Night We Cried...

And After, We Died.


I know that the words are all capitalized, in my opinion, it looks cooler that way.

an my lyrics suck??

Yes.


Yes, they do.

And I really don't see how that is constructive criticism, in the least.


How old are you, anyway?

my rymes are sick what u talkin bout

The fact that they aren't.

someones jealous cuz im dope
an ya feelin sorry for yaself cuz u got no hope

Bloody hell, you're egotistical.