First attempt at songwriting, so probably not to amazing, but its a work in progress. Lyrics aren't necessarily in the order they would be in the final cut of the song, so it could be switched up. Also, i dont really have an intro yet, so suggestions would be nice.
Rate, suggest lyric changes, any tips would be great! Thanks.
(Intro???maybe?lol)
Feel this infectious beat
babe, you gotta be quick on your feet,
Come and run away with me into the streets.
(Chorus???)
I just NEED YOUR LOVE
this feeling, its so exotic
the growth, its psychotic
to have all of you, it wouldn't be enough
but right now... my love is only Embryonic
I can't control this thing inside
it constantly cries for you
when it erupts, it'll be like suicide
he requires your blood, like nasferatu
He'll bust through my ches
but I wont live to see the rest,
i tried my hardest to save you,
but he wont listen to my protests.
Embryonic