why try

hey this is sort of my first time so... here we go its something i just wrote

Why do i try to be with you
You who shows me such disdain
You know just what to do
To make me feel worthless
Know just what to say
To make me what to be alone
I hate you at the end of each day
I love you when it starts again


hope it at least entertain you for a little while. feel free to post any tips or anything you want. bye

It's quite cute, however, the last two lines feels cheesy. The first two lines are very good, in my humble opinion.

I really liked it...good job