I'll Say Hello

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  1. pncl&ppr said:

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    Outside these walls, a world I do not know
    Within this skin, a fire I dare not show
    When the lights go out, warm hearts shall glow
    And as my shadow waves goodbye, to love I'll say hello
    All I ask is for someone to call my own
    When I'm grown so I'm not alone
    Someone to kiss in a place like this
    I'll call them bliss but when they're gone I'll miss them
    I'll cry at night if they're not by my side
    I've been scared and alone all my life
    So please, bring her back to me
    I need to see that today is not her D.O.D.
    Let her breath be more than all that's left
    But it seems this life of mine's bereft

    I have lost all that I once had
    Once iron clad, but rose has fallen from my hand
    Dropped on her grave, next to her name
    On stone it has been engraved
    How can I ever live again, I've lost my friend
    She loved me until the very end
    Now I say, my world has gone grey
    Who brought on this foul play?
    Why'd you close her eyes for the very last time
    Why did you take all that was mine

    All that I have now is this room full of clouds
    And a fire in my heart that won't go out
    An empty chair sitting over there
    An empty spot at which I stare
    I promised from now on to never leave her side
    So here I sit and hide taking every day in stride

    Outside these walls, a world I cannot know
    Within this skin, a fire I cannot show
    When my lights go out, our warm hearts shall glow
    And as my shadow waves goodbye, to my love I'll say hello
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    This is not the end
    I will not say goodbye
    To my only friend
    I'd rather lay and die

    As this conscientiousness slowly fades
    I make my way back from whence I came
    To the one I've loved you will be missed
    You were the only one worth the risk

    And as my shadow waves goodbye
    To my love I'll say hello
    Before now you were my life
    But when you died you took my soul


    I like what you wrote and was inspired to write this.
    Smilez
     
  3. pq92k said:

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    I like how you use the theme of death and grief in a creative way. I enjoyed reading your lyrics. The first four lines are great, especially the fourth line; "And as my shadow waves goodbye, to love I'll say hello"; and they set the right tone.