Goodbye

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  1. RobberBaron said:

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    Goodbye - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011

    [Verse]

    Followed by demons and chased down by darkness,
    The edges of evil still enter my heart,
    A black blade of poison releases me slowly,
    Each drip of my blood lets my anger run dry

    [Pre-Chorus]

    The devils they tell us,
    That we should be jealous,
    The dark of the night calls me in

    [Chorus]

    Now it's time,
    To say goodbye,
    Until we meet,
    Up in the sky

    Cut out from,
    The darkest place,
    And taken back,
    To warm embrace

    And you will find,
    Me lying there,
    But who will,
    Even care?
    Goodbye

    [Verse]

    Thinking it over with blade in my hand,
    Running from secrets I don't understand,
    So hard to do it but so hard to stay,
    Just one more step and it'll all end today

    [Pre-Chorus]

    Always get lying,
    There's no point in trying,
    I close my eyes cos I can't stay

    [Chorus]

    Now it's time,
    To say goodbye,
    Until we meet,
    Up in the sky

    Cut out from,
    The darkest place,
    And taken back,
    To warm embrace

    And you will find,
    Me lying there,
    But who will,
    Even care?
    Goodbye

    [Bridge]

    Take it or leave it or burn it in flames,
    I've heard that God works in mysterious ways,
    I guess that in my head I'm not what you see,
    Cos if you saw what I saw you'd try to kill me

    [Chorus]

    Now it's time,
    To say goodbye,
    Until we meet,
    Up in the sky

    Cut out from,
    The darkest place,
    And taken back,
    To warm embrace

    And you will find,
    Me lying there,
    But who will,
    Even care?
    Goodbye
    Last edited by RobberBaron; 08-02-2011 at 12:30 AM.
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    I really love this! Damn it's good.
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  3. RobberBaron said:

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    Thank you very much, I've been away for a while and I've written lots of new songs but last night I was in a bit of a dark mood and I just decided to write this and see what people thought. I've nearly finished the music track for it actually, but it's really weird…
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    I feel ya. I was gone for awhile also, but have been inspired by recent events.
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  5. bbplyer said:

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    This is really good! Good Job
     
  6. pq92k said:

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    These are a good set of lyrics. Very vivid description. I really like the lines "I guess that in my head I'm not what you see/Cos if you saw what I saw you'd try to kill me"