New song by a brand new member

Thank god for google. I might had to have actually looked around for this thing back in the day. Anyway I signed up for the obvious to, to post some lyrics, see what other people think. So I hope you like my lyrics....anyway....

Linguistic Sovereignty

I had something last night, a line in my head, fled in fright
That it would be looked at
and pondered, and overanalyzed, through squander

It's probably better for you
To not see this, through and through
Till the end your will
It may bend, it'll change again, but with my thoughts lent

To this situation
That we have on our hands
Through my own mediacation
I will try and meet
my own, demands

This deep sensation
Felt throughout many lands
A kingdoms nihilation
It will crush your city
In to the, sands

Help that you get is never far
Look around for the freehelp Czar
To analyze your thoughts
What you're thinking, how you're doing, on the brink

Of this situation
That we have on our hands
Through my medication
I will try and meet
my own, demands

This deep sensation
Felt throughout many lands
A kingdoms nihilaiton
It will crush your city
In to the, sands

Vituperation
Castration
Humiliation
What I felt that night

Miseration
Damnation
A damned nation
So you can plunder and plight




So yeah thats a song, I dunno what the etiquet is for post length but HEY I'll soon find out I guess right?

Post length varies, but good lyrics. My favorite lines are Damnation a damned nation.

I like it, but you tend to use words that a lot of people may have to Google.

Hey thabks inskeeper rule. Ye i may or may not have giggled in excitement when I wrote that....

And rrroybp thanks! Ye I like to write whatever flows out, and I draw a lot of inspiration from the Latin language so I use a variety of words Latin derived.

I do enjoy seeing lyrics with a higher standard vocabulary than some posts on this site. Keep up the good work.

Originally Posted by Inskeepruler

I do enjoy seeing lyrics with a higher standard vocabulary than some posts on this site. Keep up the good work.

Metalanguage for the win man.

Originally Posted by Frankie Syphnx

Through my own mediacation

Hi,

I hope this line isn't a typo, because it is absolute genius!

Originally Posted by Mixalopoulos

Hi,

I hope this line isn't a typo, because it is absolute genius!

I was hoping someone would catch that line!

Hey forum dwellers I'd really appreciate more feeedback if you could spare it.