Dying

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  1. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    [Verse]
    That Temper collides with this sadness.
    Depression lurks and I am drifting away,
    Suddenly,
    I'm drowning in this pool of pure rejection.
    Another part of your so graceful heart.

    [Hook]
    What a monster you've become,
    Another sorrowful season.
    Come back to me, come back to me.

    [Chorus]
    Give me one more chance!
    Whatever did I do so wrong?
    Come back to me! Come back to me!
    Why are you saying this?
    Is this the real truth?
    Save me from me! Save me from me!

    With all this sadness~ slowly believe, I'll slowly believe, you hate me.

    [Verse]
    Taking things out, holding this blade tight.
    Pressure against delicate skin, please be brave.
    Bleeding.
    Red liquid, it's toxic. Yet addicting.
    Rainbow veins, fade grey.--

    [Hook]
    What a monster you've become,
    Another sorrowful season,
    Come back to me, come back to me.

    [Chorus]
    Give me one more chance!
    Whatever did I do so wrong?
    Come back to me! Come back to me!
    Why are you saying this? Is this the real truth?
    Save me from me! Save me from me!

    I'm slowly dying,
    Slowly believe, I'll slowly believe you hate me.

    [Bridge]
    All this time I thought you loved me as, much as I loved you.
    All this time I thought you gave your heart all to me~
    I don't understand-

    [Chorus]
    But give me one more chance..
    Tell me, what'd I do so wrong?
    Asking politely,
    Asking so desperately!

    Give me one more chance!
    Your heart is where I belong!
    Your the only soul that could, save me from me!
    Inslaved by the swallowed key to your heart.


    Inzomnbia~
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
  2. MR.Alexander said:

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    wow (claps wildly) i love it bravo. wow im cring now. wow this si amazing very good (keeps clapping till hands bleed)
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    I love this, but honestly, my favorite part is "inzomnbia" Hahaha!
    Smilez
     
  4. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Hehe thankies Alex! And lol silly inskeep! That's not apart of the song hehehe.
    I love these lyrics ;P
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Eams said:

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    my sissy's good :3
    The stature of a man is not decided by the size of his fists, but by how he uses them.
     
  6. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Grr! LOL this song is about my bf Brandon ]:
    Hahaha. I love you dudes.
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    Katie13 said:

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    Shadow!!!!
    Oh, this is so good. The depth of emotion, the flowing storytelling, the brilliant wording. This line says so much - "All this time I thought you loved me as, much as I loved you." - and I love this - "Give me one more chance! Whatever did I do so wrong?". It smacks of desperation. What a hook for the beginning of the chorus.

    Lil' sis, I hope this song is soon unneeded Smiles!

    PS. It's enslaved, not inslaved. Just so's you know. I'm a stickler for good English :P
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  8. ShadowLeeSharp's Avatar

    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Thanks so much! I appreciate your kindness it amazes me that I still get so much love here even when I've been gone for like ever! Thank you! (((:
    Hehe :3

    And lol! Enslaved, I just noticed that xD I'll fix it, thanks!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    ShadowLeeSharp said:

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    Dude like- who knew such a sad story would be so good it just makes you wanna *CRIES*

    Lol Jk thanks again guys! Remember just because I don't comment on your lyrics DOESN'T mean I don't read them! I try my best to come and read your lyrics all the time it's so fun I love to see how much you guys are progressing .
    And EAMS! I wuv you brother!

    P.S Have a great Christmas guys!
    ImTheBaby of ATL! FearMe, RawR!!
    -This Shadow is like a homeless puppy. She'll love you in seconds. And she'll still love you no matter what even though you hurt her so badly-
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Shadooooow ! You're still here <3
    And of course, still amazing . I love this song ♥ Message me when you can
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.