David Buscamante - Hoy tengo ganas de ti

Hola amigos queridos Aqui mando un texto, pero si alquien puede echarlo un vistazo , voy a ser muy feliz Gracias por adelantado

Fuiste ave de paso, y no sé porque razón
You went away like a bird of passage, and I don’t know why
me fui acostumbrando, cada día más a ti
I got used to it, each day more and more with you
los dos inventamos, la aventura del amor
Both of us made up the adventure of the love
llenaste mi vida, y después te vi partir
You filled my life, and later on I saw you leaving
sin decirme adiós, yo te vi partir
Without saying me goodbye, I saw you leaving
Quiero en tus manos abiertas buscar mi camino
I want in your open arms to find my way
y que te sientas mujer solamente conmigo
I that you feel woman just with me
hoy tengo ganas de ti, hoy tengo ganas de ti
Today, I desire you/I want you, I desire you/ I want you
Quiero apagar en tus labios la sed de mi alma
I want to set the thirsty of my soul on your lips
y descubrir el amor juntos cada mañana
And that we discover the love each morning together with you
hoy tengo ganas de ti, hoy tengo ganas de ti
Today, I desire you/I want you, I desire you/ I want you
No hay nada más triste, que el silencio y el dolor
There is nothing else that sad, than the silence and the pain
nada más amargo, que saber que te perdí
Nothing else bitter, to know that I lost you
hoy busco en la noche, el sonido de tu voz
Today I search in the night the sound of your voice
y donde te escondes, para llenarme de ti
And where do you hide, so that you fill me with you?
llenarme de ti, llenarme de ti
Fill me with you, fill me with you

I think you try to stick to the Spanish word order too much, in English it might sound weird sometimes, but this is the most difficult in translating

Fuiste ave de paso, y no sé porque razón
You went away like a bird of passage, and I don’t know why => "You were like a bird, just passing, and I don't know why" sounds more logical to me than went away for fuiste
me fui acostumbrando, cada día más a ti
I got used to it, each day more and more with you => "I got more and more used to you, everyday" (because 'acostumbrando a ti' goes together)
los dos inventamos, la aventura del amor
Both of us made up the adventure of [the] love
llenaste mi vida, y después te vi partir
You filled my life, and later on/AFTER I saw you leaving
sin decirme adiós, yo te vi partir
Without saying me goodbye, I saw you leaving
Quiero en tus manos abiertas buscar mi camino
I want in your open arms to find my way
y que te sientas mujer solamente conmigo
& that you feel woman just with me
hoy tengo ganas de ti, hoy tengo ganas de ti
Today, I desire you/I want you, I desire you/ I want you
Quiero apagar en tus labios la sed de mi alma
I want to set the thirsty of my soul on your lips => I want to quench the thirst of my soul on your lips (sounds more English to me)
y descubrir el amor juntos cada mañana
And that we discover [the] love each morning together [ with you ] => It's redondant if you say "together with you", just one of it is enough
hoy tengo ganas de ti, hoy tengo ganas de ti
Today, I desire you/I want you, I desire you/ I want you
No hay nada más triste, que el silencio y el dolor
=> There is nothing sadDER, than the silence and the pain
nada más amargo, que saber que te perdí
=> Nothing MORE bitter, THAN to know that I lost you
hoy busco en la noche, el sonido de tu voz
Today I search in the night the sound of your voice
y donde te escondes, para llenarme de ti
And where do you hide, so that you fill me with you? => And where you hide, to fill myself with you (it's not a direct question)
llenarme de ti, llenarme de ti
Fill me with you, fill me with you

A correction, velvet_sky, with your permission:

Originally Posted by velvet_sky

Aqui mando un texto, pero si alquien puede echarle un vistazo...

"Un vistazo" is direct object, and "un texto", indirect object.

Lyssa, thank you for your corrections! You're right, maybe I tried to stick to the Spanish word order, which is not quiet right. In future I will try to translating better I will do my best

momper, thanks to you too