hey peaple, I just started with songwriting, so I hoped that you peaple could read my first lyrics and rate it.
and if it could tell me what can be better.
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the way of life
The first time I saw you
I didn’t know what to do
Then you looked to me
I couldn’t count till three
And then I looked in your eyes
I saw the paradise
I walked to you
So I wasn’t like other fools
Who stand on the sideline
And didn’t dare to say hi
Chorus:
You’re into me
I hope to get into you
So baby tell me what I got to do
So you will love me too
Love me too OH YEAH.
Now I wanted to ask you out
But I didn’t dare to say it out loud
That’s why I wrote this song
And because I know we belong
To each other
Like no other
Chorus
Please baby I’m begging
Please baby I’m singing
Will you please go out with me
I hope you think it’s a great idea
Baby all I want to say
And it gets stronger every day
Is I love you
so please tell me what I got to do
to make you love me too
Chorus
Baby please give me a chance
Come on and dance
With me
So baby you can see
Who is the real me