I See

Sometimes I wonder why you continue to wait,
Are you afraid to let go,
Scared it would be a mistake,
I promise the pain will go away,
I'll help you everyday,
You're worth so much more than an occasional hi,
You deserve all the love that someone can hold inside,
I'll never understand and I'll never believe,
That he truly cares about you more than me,

I see what he chooses not to,
I see the halo above you,
I see all the love that you have to share,
I see how much you really care,
But I can't see how he doesn't see,
How he's got someone like you and how he's so lucky,
Because I would cherish that you were mine,
And remind you all the time,
Of how special you are,
And just how far,
I would go to keep you smiling every day,
You're the only girl who takes my breath away,

I'm so confused,
On how you can do what you do,
Just hoping and praying wishing on a star,
But I've got some news I'm wishing on the stars too,
And like Bruno Mars,
You've got me talking to the moon,
Hoping you're on the other taking to it too,
But I know inside if you are you're not talking to me,
It's to him even though you can't see it's not meant to be,
But I'll just keep talking hoping one day you'll see,

I see what he chooses not to,
I see the halo above you,
I see all the love that you have to share,
I see how much you really care,
But I can't see how he doesn't see,
How he's got someone like you and how he's so lucky,
Because I would cherish that you were mine,
And remind you all the time,
Of how special you are,
And just how far,
I would go to keep you smiling every day,
You're the only girl who takes my breath away,

I don't wanna see you hurting anymore,
So I hope that you get what you've been waiting for,
And you can leave everything else in the past,
The present and future is where the love will last,

I see what he chooses not to,
I see the halo above you,
I see all the love that you have to share,
I see how much you really care,
But I can't see how he doesn't see,
How he's got someone like you and how he's so lucky,
Because I would cherish that you were mine,
And remind you all the time,
Of how special you are,
And just how far,
I would go to keep you smiling every day,
You're the only girl who takes my breath away.

God damn, this song is good, talking about how you love that person but is with someone else. This raise questions of how different that you and that person see in the person you love, you would know if he/she would cherish more than you or less than you do.
Anyway pretty great song just one lay tip make the last phrase at the end to repeat 3 more times, it's give a finishing touch as you end it by the 4th repeat with music fade as you end it. I just visualize how it would be sung xD

Damn this is good.

Originally Posted by Inskeepruler

Damn this is good.

I know <3

Aww nearly made me cry, this is reaaaaaaaly good, I love it, its so meaningful, do you write songs about how your emotions are taking over your body and how you relationships are? If so, I feel so sad right now *big hug* :')

Thanks guys. I really appreciate it.
&& yea sophieB most of the songs I write are personal.
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