Nurettin Rençber LAL-İ REYHAN
Dertler altında kalan
Can çekişen yüreğime
Bir yanıt gibi geldin
Ağlayan yüreğime
Bir ince soluk oldun
Yüreğim çıktı güne
Işığım oldun umudum oldun
Yüreğim oldun sevdam
Senle ağlarım senle gülerim
Senle yaşayıp senle ölürüm
Karlar altında kalan
Buz kesen düşlerime
Bir güneş gibi oldun
Amansız kışlarıma
Bahar güneşi oldun
Zemheri kışlarıma
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Nurettin Rençber ----LAL-İ REYHAN on english please
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Dertler altında kalan Can çekişen yüreğime Bir yanıt gibi geldin // For my heart dying in agony (and) left under sorrows, you were like an answer.
Ağlayan yüreğime Bir ince soluk oldun // You are a slight breath to my crying heart
Yüreğim çıktı güne // (and now) My heart is in daylight (again)
Işığım oldun umudum oldun // You are my ray of light, you are my hope
Yüreğim oldun sevdam // You are my heart, my love
Senle ağlarım senle gülerim // I’ll cry with you, I’ll smile with you
Senle yaşayıp senle ölürüm // I’ll live and die with you
Karlar altında kalan Buz kesen düşlerime // For my dreams freezing under the snow
Bir güneş gibi oldun // you became like the sunshine
Amansız kışlarıma // to my merciless winters
Bahar güneşi oldun // You are the spring sun
Zemheri kışlarıma // to the coldest (part) of my winters
*edit- smilochka, I tried to put in ercmnt's corrections, I hope it makes it clearer.
Last edited by partizanka; 09-20-2011 at 07:57 AM. Reason: Help from |:
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Now i am really speachless about your improvement in Turkish.
Do you have a secret too?
just small things that cant be called corrections. The sentences are connected. (you did great translation seperatly) and 2 idioms.
Dertler altında kalan (1)
Can çekişen yüreğime(2)
Bir yanıt gibi geldin(3)
You were just like an answer (3), for my heart dying in agony(2), left under sorrows(1)
Güne çıkmak is an idiom meaning like, passing the sorrows, troubles. -being/seeing daylight again
So yüreğim güne cıktı something like my heart came through sorrows. My hearth is in daylight (again)
Karlar altında kalan(1)
Buz kesen düşlerime(2)
Bir güneş gibi oldun (3)
You became like sunshine (3) for my dreams feezing*(2) under the snow(1)
*Buz kesmek = idiom, being cold too much. -
Thank you ercmnt.
I thought this. I tried to show they were connected by starting some lines with capital letters and some lines without. But I didn't get all the connections.
Originally Posted by ercmnt
Grrr, I think I knew this. Thanks for explaining. If it's alright with you, I'll edit some of mine to make it easier for smilochka.Karlar altında kalan(1)
Buz kesen düşlerime(2)
Bir güneş gibi oldun (3)
You became like sunshine (3) for my dreams feezing*(2) under the snow(1)
*Buz kesmek = idiom, being cold too much. -
Thanks for the nice lyrics. and thanks for the translation. Originally Posted by smilochka
Last edited by ercmnt; 09-20-2011 at 08:09 AM.
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thank u so much!!!!!!!!!!!great translation Originally Posted by partizanka
Dertler altında kalan Can çekişen yüreğime Bir yanıt gibi geldin // For my heart dying in agony (and) left under sorrows, you were like an answer.
Ağlayan yüreğime Bir ince soluk oldun // You are a slight breath to my crying heart
Yüreğim çıktı güne // (and now) My heart is in daylight (again)
Işığım oldun umudum oldun // You are my ray of light, you are my hope
Yüreğim oldun sevdam // You are my heart, my love
Senle ağlarım senle gülerim // I’ll cry with you, I’ll smile with you
Senle yaşayıp senle ölürüm // I’ll live and die with you
Karlar altında kalan Buz kesen düşlerime // For my dreams freezing under the snow
Bir güneş gibi oldun // you became like the sunshine
Amansız kışlarıma // to my merciless winters
Bahar güneşi oldun // You are the spring sun
Zemheri kışlarıma // to the coldest (part) of my winters
*edit- smilochka, I tried to put in ercmnt's corrections, I hope it makes it clearer.)))
