Love Lie - a song about what never was

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  1. Joe4Jet's Avatar

    Joe4Jet said:

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    One of the worst pains of all, is thinking you love someone that doesn't love you back...
    This is a song that describes it.


    High pitched screams proclaim everything
    Hanging by a thread, just hanging
    Your hearts not black, its just veiled so
    Uninterested, that I know

    Putrid lies, dilated eyes
    Visionary, capsized
    Heartbeat, torn in two
    Mirage, see-through

    I cry out loud, but you can’t hear
    Muffled noises, it sounds unclear
    Your oblivious, to the fact
    I love you, yet you don’t know that

    I’m stuck to you, like superglue
    But your nonsense, I fall right through
    Your hearts tied, with another guy
    But he’ll loosen the threads, love lie

    Putrid lies, dilated eyes
    Visionary, capsized
    Heartbeat, torn in two
    Mirage, see-through

    I hope you see, don’t forget me
    Wipe your eyes, as far as can be
    Nowhere to be found, I’m gone now
    You sit and cry, and wonder how

    Always been there, never left you
    I love you, yeah I loved you too
    How is it going, with that man?
    Oh he left you, that’s his game plan.

    I wouldn’t leave, I told you so
    You didn’t believe, never know
    Time and time, don’t appreciate
    Oh its over now, its too late.
    --My love has a place, filed it so
    Collecting dust, sadly its unknown
    Hopes raised, high is the bar to expect
    The life that once was, I now forget--
     
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    this is good. i like the form. its refreshing to see something other than straight ryhmes.
    The stature of a man is not decided by the size of his fists, but by how he uses them.
     
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    tackpic_47 said:

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    "Always been there, never left you
    I love you, yeah I loved you too
    How is it going, with that man?
    Oh he left you, that’s his game plan."

    "I wouldn’t leave, I told you so
    You didn’t believe, never know
    Time and time, don’t appreciate
    Oh its over now, its too late."
    These are my favorite lines...its something how a person doesn't see what they have before its too late..
     
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    Joe4Jet said:

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    @Eams thank you sir. I'm glad you've enjoyed what I wrote.

    @tackpic_47 those last 2 stanzas just basically summarize the entire song. The whole meaning is being in love with your best friend and they only think of you as "family material." It's sad how most girls don't realize that the best man for them has been there all along until it's too late for them to notice it. Thank you for the appreciation.
    --My love has a place, filed it so
    Collecting dust, sadly its unknown
    Hopes raised, high is the bar to expect
    The life that once was, I now forget--
     
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    Krent_Calstro777 said:

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    The stanzas that Tackpic quoted are not only just the summarized part of the while song but it's really catchy enough to get it stuck in my head
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.
     
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    @Krent why thank you very much! Haha I would of never guessed that any part of those lyrics would be catchy enough to get stuck in someones head. Well I hope you enjoy those lyrics for hours to come before another song takes over your head
    --My love has a place, filed it so
    Collecting dust, sadly its unknown
    Hopes raised, high is the bar to expect
    The life that once was, I now forget--