Paranoia

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    Sewn Up said:

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    Alright, I'm back. It's been a while, so I hope you enjoy this one. Everyone has those times in their lives when they feel like something is calling out to them like a voice from the darkest parts of their soul, driving them to do something they know they not only wouldn't normally do, but also what they know they shouldn't do. So I thought to myself "What would happen if someone couldn't keep those parts of themselves under control? What kind of things could they be thinking?" My answer to these questions are this song. Enjoy.

    I can still hear you voice
    Although I have no choice.
    There's too many people
    Talking in my head.
    It's like a concert
    With the dead.

    Chorus:
    Can't you hear them?
    (I'VE BECOME AFRAID)
    Because you encourage them!
    (SOMEONE GIVE ME AID!)
    I fear that man.
    (THEY TELL ME WHAT HE TAKES!)
    He needs to try
    TO FIX HIS MISTAKES!

    In my mind I get bombarded
    By these voices that continue
    What they started.
    The more they say, the more I fear,
    The more they try to keep me here.
    Is that guy looking at me?
    Get me outta here.....WHAT'S HE GONNA DO TO ME?!

    Chorus

    [whispering]
    (go ahead...do it...never got the respect you deserve.....
    take it to the limit....you always tell me about it....
    you can't escape the urge...you carry it with you ALWAYS...)

    Keep away...I'm gonna break...
    I can't take it...GET OUT OF MY HEAD....
    I HATE the fear...I wanna be alone...
    My sanity's fading....I'M ABOUT TO BREAK!!!

    Now you here them!
    (YOU'VE BECOME AFRAID)
    Because now they spead to you!
    (NOW YOU NEED THE AID!)
    You fear that man
    (BECAUSE THAT MAN IS YOU!)
    Now the voices
    INSTILL FEAR IN YOU!!!
    Last edited by Sewn Up; 06-22-2006 at 08:42 PM.
     
  2. xpoisonivyx said:

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    I like it a lot.

    =]
     
  3. theUsed13 said:

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    wow i liked it a lot. the first verse relli grabbbed me right away. also, thanks for the comments u left on mine. im into a lot of music.. lots of emo stuff like the starting line, thursday, and the old saves the day. mostly alternative too, and from time to time metal. my influences... everything, from a musical standpoint id have to say saves the day, taking back sunday, and even corey taylor from slipknot. also my friends and just people i know influence me to write.