Just being fair to life and persueing my dream. White Rapper.

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    Derek James Sheppeard said:

    Exclamation Just being fair to life and persueing my dream. White Rapper.

    Well if you have any questions you can read my profile. I just need some criticism from you guys so I can either close this chapter or start writing on a regular basis. Writing and continuing is what I would like to do. Not if it is a waste of time though. Just let me know what you think. I have been flowing with the Brotha's from 13 up. My life story is a good one to tell and I do believe I have a God given talent. Writing and as I have known since I was child Rapping. Anyhow lets do this. I hope this helps some people. I really need boosters from you guys. I have not felt good lately. My mind is kinda 1,000,000 miles per hour. I dunno who feels me on that out there. But I put it to use the last two days and this is what I have... Enjoy people....

    Thanks to all who read,
    Derek
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    #1
    I know what these demons came to do, they came to do me through...
    Time Wasted like blood, that is equal to death... ohhh I have blead..
    My knees have gone to suicidal lengths if they were to be fatal to a man.
    I know my soul belongs to the lord.
    Dance the dance of pride and gesture, time is on our side.
    My stance is where my family is and where I am home. I must be prideful.
    I have graduated the game to learn the secret so now I will splurge.
    The Game starts over you don't have the WORD!

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    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    #2
    Should I look you in the eyes, will I see lies or go blind?
    I'm in the dumps with the mess, I grab the metal and say **** the rest..
    The shits getting thick, this aint nothing your gonna fix..
    Take it all and leave me with these four walls, not even the devil will make me fall.
    I walk on water when my eyes are fixed on faith, the day I look back is the day to late.
    Till I reach that shore I will keep my eyes pilled, for it is in the waves that all my fear builds.
    I am no mountain, i'm not that shore. I'm one of all these many doors.
    Use me please, I am ready to work.... It's the game in me that keeps me down on earth.
    Nothin from nothin leaves nothin. Do the math and quit your running...
    It's written in the stars, so it covers the sky. The magnitude of precision and enourmous energy in the blink of an eye...

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    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    #3
    What was my tone, that left me all alone?
    I'm behind no bars, locked in no cage.
    Just entrapped in a ton of rage.
    My speed is lighting and my gifts are great.
    But I let my blessings be ingnored, then its to late.
    If there was a sword to be given to me. I would hold it with pride and make the enemy bleed.
    I will fight and die for all that is real. Those who stay true and make no deals.
    Who is that battling in the field?
    It is me and the Devil, my angels stand by.
    A twisted brain, showered in rain, tortured with pain.
    Now I have become clinically insane.

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    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    #4

    When I think of my family its like an endless river.
    It winds and it turns and at times can make me shiver.
    Cold but true, steadily fast we all go.
    None of us hold hands down this lonely road.
    I see now why God has made you all true.
    The river is like the line of Abraham,
    the father of you.
    Ishmael is not our brother,
    we were put on the side of Isaac.
    That means we all have purpose,
    no matter the weather.
    My river flows both blood and time,
    I consider many as part of mine.
    I will be there for you, no need to bleed or plead.
    Just pray to God and open your eyes,
    and you will see me and my endless deeds.
    I only need your prayers.

    Written in less than 3 mins. Few changing of words as a typed. NO GOING BACK THOUGH : )
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    I am not stopping till this world ends,
    you have chosen to be enemies not friends.
    When I arrive to his feet and he grants me a question,
    I will forget my questions of all of you so I can be there for protection.
    My question will be simple, blunt and true.
    I will ask him if I can come be with you.
    I will request my wings to be black,
    So I will remember a life that I can never go back.

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    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    I am not stopping till this world ends,
    you have chosen to be enemies not friends.
    When I arrive to his feet and he grants me a question,
    I will forget my questions of all of you so I can be there for protection.
    My question will be simple, blunt and true.
    I will ask him if I can come be with you.
    I will request my wings to be black,
    So I will remember a life that I can never go back.

    Written in less than 2 mins. Error free
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    #6
    The world is gonna have revenge, due to all this sin. The only magic I know is Jesus, and he has not shown up yet. My angels run deep, chillin on my shoulders. Still waters run deep, I'm gonna get higher!! I have reached the mountains peak, I feel no weary and no weak. I curl up in these sheets. No I'm not cold, my soul is just old.
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Someone drop a beat, make it sweet and easy to move feet.
    I will bring rays of sun, through these windy dark streets.
    Deny me my dreams, this is how it seems.
    My mission is denied because your not by my side.
    I will twist so smooth, you will know how I bring the blues.
    My words are swift and will tingle if you enter mingle.
    Spittin fire out my chest, catching my breath takin the test.
    This is a mess but our father will bless.
    Stress free my mind flies high in the sky, my brain does not strain or ask why.
    It only soars and asks for more and more.
    If I leave you at a bore, go catch a snor and **** a *****.
    You will will come back asking for more..
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Why have you started this thread in the poetry forum?

    Do you want it moving to the rap forum?

    PS. When you put "Error free" at the end of a post, I do hope you don't mean it doesn't contain spelling mistakes, because they do.
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    Derek James Sheppeard said:

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    Yes it can be in the lyrics forum because that is what they are though I was raised on Tupac and he had his stuff in poetry form. To me that is how he wrote at least.

    Also yeah I keep the spelling like it is because I need to memorize it that way. Also error free I consider I go back and change no words you see. Or add anything. I quit when I choose on verses. Anyways I hope that answers your question. Thanks man you made a very positive post for me. : )
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Now it's all hallows eve, the moon is back again.
    It's weird how fear can cheer you huh friend.
    I like the way you dress and make your hair a mess.
    Yea, girl whats underneath that dress.
    I can't help but think, what you'll do at thanksgiving.
    I wish you were there, to give me that feeling.
    There is no warmth where I am, it ran away like the ginger bread man.
    Twisted and sick do you think I am, but my name is not wam bam thank you mam.
    You were fighting a twisted battle yourself, in your head all you see is self.
    I'm stealth when the dusk comes, and the dawn yawns.
    I was there in yours dreams, so it seems.
    What can I get for this dollar now sir? “More and more of this sin you can give to her.”

    Did you get what cha wanted, did I deliver all your treatments.
    Tell me now, why did you beat me down?
    You got it coming I can tell it now, you thought I was the clown.
    So I will make that *** frown, down the sound goes.
    You are cast down in a hole, with all your gold.
    Doesn't that cold lonely metal get old?

    I peep not at what is behind me,
    Ripples and waves all upon this sea.
    There is a thunderstorm coming your way,
    there is no dock of the bay.
    I'll be chillin when the mornin' comes,
    you will never see my mornin' sun.
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Stopping with the flows taking a overdose of this smoke.
    To the lungs, im not the one.
    Take solo to the heart, I had you from the start.
    Please send terror my way, my fear has lead me astray.
    I make my way down this beaten path, death will see my aftermath.
    Sick with all in my mind, when it go rampant I go blind.

    Sick beat got my mind thinking, grab a drank and thank the bank.
    No dollars on you ho's cause I spent it so.
    Make my polo's rock with a creese and cuffs.
    So I can march next to your stuff.
    Shake it girl, wow look at them knees...
    I know where that came from see...!
    Can't stop till the mornin' is threw, left you all alone singin my blues..
    Memphis TN is where i'm in, like Flin, **** the gin.
    Im sippin on Hen......

    Hit the streets runnin cause they firing rounds, sprint fast..
    Gonna outlast every bullet like rappers, I will wax that ***.
    Lyrics so mind strong you will think my mind is gone.
    Years in the making, God hand picked me for the succession..
    I ready my pump action for protection.....
    Screw all of your lessons... I'll thank none of you for my blessings...

    From the start, I take hearts..
    Beatin so fast I take all your agression.
    It's not up to me to teach you your lesson.
    You know what you did, don't look so turbid.
    These clouds are not your vision, they are my mission.
    Out in the field you seek higher ground, I take it you don't hear that sound.
    Sick is that pit on your ***, he is like a man who will ever last.
    Me you see needs not free, Drock in the ****ing trees...
    Bleed, pleed and hit them knees, I am at the end so no need.
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Time goes smooth, if your a cool *** dude.
    I don't mean to be crude, but I got took for what I had.
    Fresh luxurious pad, even without a Dad.
    I ain't mad though sad which can be bad.
    It's a centrifugal force that makes me feel this stuff.
    If you don't feel it go stuff your muff..
    My name is Fur, Shep and D.
    I come from these Memphis TN streets.
    On my feet I stay everyday, I do not budge I do not sway.
    The way of the gun is all I know, adrenaline rushes that can make you slow.
    My nuts are so big I never lost that ball in chain.
    Can't you see what I weigh, I am worth more than an animal.
    Think I deserve a cage? Well we will see what happens when I'm made.
    Call me Boss of this mother ****er, ***** I make them ends.
    I take care of ALL of my friends.
    In the end it is tough, to rhyme or reason with me.
    Because I am the most in cognitive brain you ever did see.
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Stop the beat let me hit it sweet, like a freak who knocked his head on a sink.
    Know my powers and what I will do, know what I can put you through.
    There are two forms of abuse, Me and all others who **** you.
    I cant tell you if I will ever reach a top, I cannot tell you if I will go flop.
    Bigidy bang its an every day thing to let my nuts hang, in this game....
    Feeling like a lamb who's been brought to slaughter.
    Motha ****a I am the one who put you on this alter.
    Don't bellow, swagga or sway, or I will put you under all the way.
    So many haters in this world, I have lost the best of friends.
    To many judges when its only his minds.
    Gone on and kiss that *** one more time, you seem to be constantly doing it just fine.
    I get mine on a daily basis, I seemingly catch no cases.
    I wake and bake on you tricks every morn, though not everyday cause it calls for 48 mane.
    I ain't even lieing, these idiots are standing in line.
    Please bake me a cake when my birthday comes due..
    I was smoking squares, when you were in yo daddies underwear..
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    I need no ship to arrive at my destination, I can fly to my safe haven.
    Tell me who has the power to stand by me, I am a has been in your mind see.
    I'll rip the trees up from their roots, I stomp mud holes in souls.
    Tweekin yet speekin all my vocals smooth, maybe I am a prepared *** dude.
    It's all in the brain, criminally minded insane.

    Thunder rips from my vocals now you seranade.
    It was me who rang in the parade and made them folks stay.
    Who has that black velvet hair, its Lil Fur the future mayor.
    Politics wavered for the night, I am drankin on some thankin tonight...
    Tokes of that smoke up in my chest, pressure release is the best.
    Protect your head and neck when I come in with my sting, I had to remove that diamond ring.
    Your debt is greater than mine, you will have to abide by time.
    I get higher than the side of a rhyme, in sequence with sublime.
    Sick is the mind and evil are the thoughts, though untouchable is all I have spoke.

    Lunatic this evil is nothing but feeble.
    It's like Evil Caneveele landing on needles.
    I blow up like Anakin, my eyes glow red, the devil starts to embed.
    There is nothing to get him out of my head.
    I reminisce on the lords great blessings, have I become blind or am I just guessing?
    Though I dispise eyes that lie, I will never ask you why..
    See ya one way or the other, even if the devil takes me under.
    Trust me just never wonder!!
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Lol I just threw this down sitting at VA DOWNTOWN and dude thumbs up my stuff on lil wayne wall I'm thinking I am doing well...

    Stuck down at the V.A., these people can take all day. I like talking to the ole' timers, they give me good reminders. I'm not less now than that life that I use to lead, I still would ensure we are all free.
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    H2O... H2O..
    On that *** a chemical reaction, time to blast em, now i'm mashin'.
    Straight assassin in the game, never stoppin my steady harrassin.
    Steady fast them hands man, what a piss poor plan.
    My genre comes within every category, tell me a story.
    I keep it all up top when its time to rock, then if I go to the hotel I remove one sock.
    Hit the block, dugg of the chain.
    I got everything down to a diamond rang, its up to you to make this stang.
    Join a gang and forget your feathers, that were given to you to endure the weather.
    Mission oriented I ain't stopping this slayin, this is the way in, I cant stop sin, I am rollin tonight.
    You got roasted and toasted just like some peanut, you won't even test this nut.
    Cause i'll cuss and cause you all kinds of rust.
    I am comin' clean, rockin them polo jeans.
    Them ho's wanna rub on the hair, later I influence down there.
    Plan ahead of yourself its a battle of chess.
    From the west, the influence came for my head and chest.
    My influence told me to pack a vest, use a smith and wes and only **** with the best.
    To rest you go, the sea crests in the night time ho's..
    Got this **** sickly solo sewed.....
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    This dark intuition, makes me wonder what's my souls tuition.
    I'm on a mission to mars, I know right where you are.
    I need no ship to arrive at my destination, I can fly to my safe haven.
    Tell me who has the power to stand by me, I am a has been in your mind see.
    I'll rip the trees up from their roots, I stomp mud holes in souls.
    Tweekin yet speekin all my vocals smooth, maybe I am a prepared *** dude.
    It's all in the brain, criminally minded insane.

    Thunder rips from my vocals now you seranade.
    It was me who rang in the parade and made them folks stay.
    Who has that black velvet hair, its Lil Fur the future mayor.
    Politics wavered for the night, I am drankin on some thankin tonight...
    Tokes of that smoke up in my chest, pressure release is the best.
    Protect your head and neck when I come in with my sting, I had to remove that diamond ring.
    Your debt is greater than mine, you will have to abide by time.
    I get higher than the side of a rhyme, in sequence with sublime.
    Sick is the mind and evil are the thoughts, though untouchable is all I have spoke.

    Lunatic this evil is nothing but feeble.
    It's like Evil Caneveele landing on needles.
    I blow up like Anakin, my eyes glow red, the devil starts to embed.
    There is nothing to get him out of my head.
    I reminisce on the lords great blessings, have I become blind or am I just guessing?
    Though I dispise eyes that lie, I will never ask you why..
    See ya one way or the other, even if the devil takes me under.
    Trust me just never wonder!!
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton
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    Mytikal remanesance, we take back in the past.
    Outlast, it's asked out on that *** down south.
    Mouth shut, completely stuffed, bump the ***** she's too ruff.
    Trust not what is see, your dreams are real.
    False realities, washed in the mud. Son give me some love...
    I need what you think as neccessities, Im here to live and breath.
    Mission on hand preprogramed plan..
    Don't ever stop or step my dreams, so it seem you don't hear me..
    Get and **** with me if you can, remember what I said of the ginger bread man.
    Run rabbit run the ginger bread man comes...
    Hi, nice to see ya brah, you better hold ya rifle and scope, cause here I come.

    When danger I loose all anger, survival sets it quicker than the stranger.
    Venom spits out my smith and west, had im in the door so I had to protect.
    No remorse on the path he chose, its his lonely road.
    Don't think of me as a sinner, but only a winner.
    It's because of men like me you have dinner.
    Sinner, yea sure I am, but winning is the plan..
    Taken no time to think of what to say, I think I will call it a day..
    May God have mercy on my enemies, because I won't. -General George Patton