No Last Goodbye

"Okay I'm done might tweak it a little more , but let me know what you think"

INTRO
(Whispered)
Time to rise, Time to fall
Time to fly, Time to crash

[Scream]
Rise up
(Sustain low growl to high scream)

Verse/
You get freedom from guilt;
With a flick of your wrist
The blood begins to run
You crush the hearts that try to heal
You give pain undeserved

Pre Chorus/
A scar caused by pain
So deep it never fades
A failing force that needs to change
A shivering body
Numbs the pain

Chorus/
Everyday I'm breaking, down
I try to run but keep falling, down
I got bad news but I got my way
You cause me pain
You are the poison in my veins
You turn around and say goodbye
I’m searching for answers
In the darkness
Knowing none are in this sadness
I'm not coming home
There's nothing left there at all
{Now I take this on my own}
With all the pain and no regrets
You don't deserve a last good bye.

Verse/
As we all must rise
We all must fall
As I try to fly to end this strife
You cause a crash to end my life

Pre chorus/
All my scars are caused by pain
Cut so deep they never fade
I'm a failing force that needs to change
My cold shivering body
Helps to numb the cold hard pain

Bridge/
All the bridges I've once crossed
Forgot all the loved ones that I've lost
Scream Till my lungs fill with blood
Now shut up and wait for the break down

{Instrumental}
My Eyes are closed
Darkness swallows me alive
All the questions to this life
They don’t F***ing matter
(Screamed)
{Wwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyy}

Chorus/
Everyday I'm breaking, down
I try to run but keep falling, down
I got bad news but I got my way
You cause me pain
You are the poison in my veins
You turn around and say goodbye
With all the pain you caused and left with no regrets
You don't deserve a last good bye

(Whispered) X4 Each time getting louder the last is screamed
Time to rise, Time to fall
Time to fly, Time to crash

(low to highest scream possible)
Time to crash

I think this is awesome, i love the lyrics Keep going and put the rest up, I'd love to see it finished! xx Be an ace metal/evanescence kinda song i think x