Ghost Train Love

Verse 1/
I want to see you smile and understand,
The way I’m feeling baby,
I got so much emotion inside,
But I’ve always been misunderstood,
What I thought was a dream,
Turned out to be real,
Now I’m crumbling in this nightmare alone,
Parallel universe and I’m somewhere in between,
Then I see your face shining down on me.

Pre-Chorus/
Now before I go,
‘Cos I will get out of here,
I just want you to have,
A place in your heart for memories of me.

Chorus/
In the wreckage of this freak accident,
The ghost train went off the rails,
I propose to you in the old fashioned way,
Your bride I’ll be for all time,
I just want you to remember me,
For the lonely vagabond I was,
Your heart was my intensive care ward,
And man you really saved my life.

Verse 2/
Picking up the bodies which broke in the crash,
You’re the one I want to save,
If I were to stay in this land,
I’d make sure I piece you back together,
In among this brutality,
There’s a love that is real,
Dreams are not always that far fetched,
‘Cos in here if I pinch I actually bleed,
But I don’t think this is the right place for me.

Pre-Chorus/
Now before I go,
‘Cos I will get out of here,
I just want you to have,
A place in your heart for memories of me.

Chorus/
In the wreckage of this freak accident,
The ghost train went off the rails,
I propose to you in the old fashioned way,
Your bride I’ll be for all time,
I just want you to remember me,
For the lonely vagabond I was,
Your heart was my intensive care ward,
And man you really saved my life.

Bridge/
I just want you to remember me baby,
For everything that I have been,
The saviour of the land in between,
The sweetest freak you have ever seen,
I want to give you something to think of me,
An eye or skeletal part,
We’re all broken in to pieces babe,
But one thing that is whole is my heart,
‘Cos you, yes you have made me strong.

Chorus/
In the wreckage of this freak accident,
The ghost train went off the rails,
I propose to you in the old fashioned way,
Your bride I’ll be for all time,
I just want you to remember me,
For the lonely vagabond I was,
Your heart was my intensive care ward,
And man you really saved my life.

Final Chorus/
I just want you to remember me,
For the lonely vagabond I was,
Your heart was my intensive care ward,
And wow you really saved my life.

This shows talent. I would pare down the metaphors and whole song. It's too rich. Do you really want to say the sweetest freak. Maybe I'm missing something and I do attest to being out of touch, but what is all the Halloween stuff in the bridge. Maybe you want that? But then it would seem to me that you are riding too many trains of thought for one song.
Thanks for sharing!

Hey! Thanks for your comment I was going for a theme sort of halloweeney/nightmare kinda thing lol, I could probably do with toning it down a bit though to be fair! Too many ideas for one song can be overpowering. Thanks very much x