I've faced the rain

This morning,
I received the letter,
I woke up early,
in a frizzy december,
This is the turning point,
the ****ing corner,
So leave up your joint,
let's grow older,
You gotta get colder,
take things harder,
Opening the letter,
i understood it clever,
The goal is not to get richer,
but smarter,
Weird deal, but it don't matter,
whatever,
I'm stuck with Forever,
and Never!
Future is in a cloudy weather,
I'm reading softly,
i've heard a mumble,
Death is on the balcony,
I've got some problems,
They're taking me, I'm sorry,
They want me to be a rap musician,
I get drunk with negativity,
Lost in the ocean,
I'm in detention,
I can't even reach a float,
Cause Devil is on his boat,
Fishing at me.

[chorus]
I've faced the Rain,
Beautiful pain,
I've faced the Sun,
Still in the Game,
I've faced the snow,
Cold and Insane,
I've faced the wind,
But it never lighted off...
My flame... (x2)


No remorses, no regrets,
Only, shame in my reflect,
Outdated need a reset,
Tempest is coming,
I'll never be safe,
Like a tree,
i get a rest,
The wind is blowing,
then i get the shake,
****ing headache,
Not easy to break,
False smile faked,
You'll never see me naked,
Crook as a snake,
Surrounded by sakes,
I'm making mistakes,
You better break my neck,
I think about suicide,
Self mutilate,
But I looked by the other side,
I've got to reach my fate,
Climb the steps,
Hold my breath,
Release the stress,
Hold my hand,
You're my special guest,
Kiss my chest,
I'll give my best,
Whenever i'll faced,
**** I'm losing the race...

I've faced the Rain,
Beautiful pain,
I've faced the Sun,
Still in the Game,
I've faced the snow,
Cold and Insane,
I've faced the wind,
But it never light off...
My flame... (x2)

Set me free if you can feel it,
Let me breath if you can hear it.

Max. Pretty creative style there... Lost flow in parts but very deep lyrics...maybe it would help if you, wrote to the end of each bar..great stuff though.. Keep at it..

It still needs work on ! You lost the flow only because, the speed varies throughout each lines ! Thank you for the advice, and for the feed !

No problem. Yeah..you do have a wild style. Sets you apart from most artist... I dig it...