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  1. charles reese said:

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    All these women say they mad at me
    but love is war
    so whats another casualty
    Ill make you mine
    cuz i dig u
    no magazine love girl
    i dont want no issues
    i hope that we get married
    so i never have to miss (ms) you
    lets just stay together
    siamese twins
    I can make this right
    ball point pens
    hard to defend
    my heart is ungaurded
    scottie pippen
    I go in, I go in
    i hope that she can get it
    i hope that she can find my heart
    and do something good with it
    hope shes down with this lifestyle
    this life is unforgivin
    this life costs
    this life is for the livin
    im ready for a family
    i hope shes down for givin
    my life is feelin empty
    hope that she can compensate
    somethings not right
    maybe we should conversate
    I hope she can relate
    hope shes down to spend her time
    i hope im not to late
    Mystereese
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    SK'nDeep said:

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    Charles, nice topic to run with..As far as lyrical struture, not too bad..lots of potential here,
    the main thing that caught my attention is that you got your point accross...keep at it...
    Peace Love Empathy

    Sk'nDeep
  3. charles reese said:

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    Thanks
    Mystereese