Today is Great

(Chorus)
Today is great
moma in the kitchen cooking eggs
not a bad word said

Plans for today is to be myself X2

(Verse)
I wake up
same as usual
trying to figure out
what attitude is sutiable

for the rest of the day
i got plans
gamble life on dice
hoping that 7 lands

momma she praying for me
knowing i aint got it all
soon as i get in trouble
she gone/she gone rat it all
<tell my whole family>

and thats the truth
but I still love yah
she my grandma
best described as my mother

as a young man i try to make it on my way
but the things that she say
guides my plans for the day

but my peers think otherwise
how come you don't have the freedom like other guys?
man yo momma wear the pants
yo mama runs the game
i thought you was smooth
suede
now you lame

knowing me i ignore the words being said
they just mad
cause they momma not cooking eggs

(Chorus)
Today is great
momma in the kitchen cooking eggs
not a bad word said

Plans for today is to be myself X2

not bad but this has the potential to be great...I see allot of pauses almost like it's old school style...rhyme stucture is on point. lacking syllibal here and there... but a great start...any advice just PM me...

I appreciate the advice...yeah it is set up as an old school feel..but thats what I like (music with meaning)!