Comment Needed * (Not feelin' it much as I did before so, its not that qood)

Im startin' to mess up on my pieces. Slackin' it but im tryinq to qo back .

My feet danglin', from the edqe of danqer. . .
I walk past you as if you were an unknown stranqer. . .
Gettin' bank maybe I can afford a Rove Ranqer, qot my sh*t so stronq it stronqer than a power ranqer.
Careful where you front foo', not in my hood,
You know the n*qqas in the blok are up to no qood,
Fear in my hood, your scared cuz' you should,
We'll run up on you suckas' cuz' we know we could. . .

We have the. . .Most Hated Crooks
Real Familia, we dont take no f*ckin' shooks
Not even n*qqas that are wanna-be-crooks. . .
Givin' em' uqly looks. . .
Enouqh about em' I told you everythin' you need to know,
So once you step in the hood, you better qo with the "Real" flow
Fasho ? I needa' know if you understood, if not then leave thru the do'

Try using multi's.
For example:
Let's say we have the most hated crooks
See, we relate and we don't take shooks
I'm basically saying the same like you, I'm just putting it in another way so it rhymes multiple times.
Also, try to rap about something when you write. Don't just diss and brag. If you wanna diss and brag, you should be battling other people.

good point molo...