Just a few short ryhmes, Feedback please!

I was given in class a few topics to write about, so tell me what you think

-Abortion-
They say every life is a unique creation
So why do many suffer premature annihilation
Whether its cus of poverty or teenage pregnancy
You'll never find out, who they were meant to be
These babies never even get to open their eyes
No excuse, a fetus cant fight for its life
Life is unique and never repeated again
So why bring it to an early end

-Depression-
Life life hanging on the edge of tommorow
Its not right living life in sorrow
Wish i could trade your tears for laughter
But for some, theres no happy ever after
Many people suffer from depression or insanity
Whether past expereince, or ****ed up mentally
Life may not some worth it, but hold onto hope
Even though its seems like a downward slope

-Terrorism-
We call talliban terrorists, are we blinded by fiction?
Is America the real terrorist nation?
They've dropped as many bombs and ended even more lives
America have gained and the worlds been deprived
Soldiers are now being pulled out of Afghanistan
But damage is done, just like Iraq and Palistan
Kill innocents, then your excuse is heaven
Blame them for 9/11 but its their 24/7

-Love-
I know this girl obsessed with guys and vanity
Cant beleive it, but she pushed me to insanity
They say love is blind, and i guessed i couldnt see
That this girl never wanted anything to do with me
Scared i would breakdown due to rejection
So she lead me on, saying it was for my protection
Now we hate each other and thats how its meant to be
The moral of the story is, love is just a fantasy

Give feedback please!

U know I love the way u tell a story with your rhymes.
I just miss a few multi's and some wordplay here and there, but I still love the message you are bringing with your rhymes.

havent been on in a while...this is the first thing i've read so far. refreshing change of pace you brought. i like it alot, u got mad skills