Please, rescue me

I'm tugged between heaven and Hell
But in the end I was in my cell
Was there really a way out?
To put my life at ease?
I have cried and shout
The sound in the prison cease
Please god, give me a sign
To show that my life has meanings
Don’t you turn your back on me, I’ve told you about my feelings
So I’ll say this… with the cuff on my wrist

Please, rescue me
Please, let me atone my sins
My life should be
Involved with my kin
All I ask to bequeath me
To the love which I’ll soon see
I’m showing my beliefs to you
So I can be free for youth
So please, rescue me
Please, rescue me

The love inside of me is growing
The light beam through the window for glowing
My prayers have been heard, my hands reaching for the air
I’ve seen the vision of my family with my darkening hairs
But I start to wonder what if this is all a lie
If it is so then it’s obvious that I should die
But I should continue believing god so I’ll say this again…With my wrists bonded with chains

Please, rescue me
Please, let me atone my sins
My life should be
Involved with my kin
All I ask to bequeath me
To the love which I’ll soon see
I’m showing my beliefs to you
So I can be free for youth
So please, rescue me
Please, rescue me

A guard opens the door
Unrestrained my wrist from chains
Showing me the way out
Crying to thank the god
My family appears before me
Using my second chance to create the life I want
I won’t repeat my mistakes
I won’t be saying this ever again

Please, rescue me
Please, let me atone my sins
My life should be
Involved with my kin
All I ask to bequeath me
To the love which I’ll soon see
I’m showing my beliefs to you
So I can be free for youth
So please, rescue me
Please, rescue me

I’m on my way on the new journey I was given by the god…
Been set free for my youth for my family to feed to….
I’m not alone anymore than before...

Wow, I really like this, although it could use some work :/

There are a couple of points where I don't understand, mainly the first two lines of the first verse, and then lines 5 and eight of the first verse. It's not written badly, just worded wrong, the sentences themselves don't make sense.

Apart from that i like it, keep it up

LazzurusMan