On my own

I'm on my own,*Just to be along
Trying to remember the life we had
You took it all and left me out
You used me till you shut my down

All I want to know is why
(Why)
Don't you remember what we had
Before you sold me out
you let me go
Now

Im on my own, just to be alone*
Trying to remember the life we had
You took it all and left me out
You used me till you shut me down

You asked yourself
Where it went wrong with the life we had
You never felt this bad*
And now it to late to know
What lays ahead you might be dead
Now*

Im on my own, just to be alone*
Trying to remember the life we had
You took it all and left me out
You used me till you shut me down


This is just a hard copy of the song I just wrote at 1am and I am gong t add a little more to I just want to hear some opinions on the song.
Thanks for reading

Needs work?

It could have work if you wanted to that badly.

It's a really nice lyric. It has good relation that people can communicate with.

Good job.

Thank you. Have you seen my other work?