im a hero

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  1. shaunfoz said:

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    just a few words put together to see how it goes,

    i am a hero....
    a logical mental dilution
    saving lives with my lyrical solutions
    what i am spitting is causing dam good conclusions
    it is not a vocal illusion
    even though you choosing to listen i force it in your head with my distinctive upbeat rhythm
  2. UnknownRapper said:

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    im gonna say one thing, i like your style but its far to short.
    you write in the same style as me, using more syllables in your words than average rappers.
    good stuff man, keep it up.

    if you've got the time i'd appreciate it if you could check out my lyrics, here is a link;
    http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...y-new-rap.html
  3. shaunfoz said:

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    it was only a 5 min job but cheers fella, i will take a look