Maybe

Maybe the sky in day is blue,
Maybe a tree from a seed grew,
Maybe the sun is a ball of fire,
Maybe we’re ruled by desire,
Maybe the air we breathe is clear,
Maybe the snowmen disappear,
Maybe a neutron star is dense,
Maybe touching is a sense,
Maybe I lost my heart long ago,
Maybe winter can bring snow,
Maybe the children laugh and cry,
Maybe the old are going to die,
Maybe at night we start to dream,
Maybe water flows in a stream,
Maybe I feel life’s gone to fast,
Maybe history was in the past,
Maybe the mountains do not bend,
Maybe a circle has no end,
Maybe giraffes are considered tall,
Maybe an atom is very small,
Maybe crying makes us sad,
Maybe laughter makes us glad,
Maybe there are clouds above,
And maybe I’m afraid of love,

Katie, i love this for its originality....right from the 1st line, you sounded like the last line...i could somehow figure out where it was all leading. Genuine train of thought.

Maybe all these things are true. And maybe they only matter if you want them too. But as to this being a well-written poem? There are no maybes about that. It definitely is.

I like this.Janis Joplin wrote a great song of the same title,I recommend you check it out!Not Maybe,Definitely!

The Great Dougg enjoying his puns...

Haha, thanks, guys! Glad you like. This was once the way I actually felt. Someone has since changed my mind

Originally Posted by Katie13

Haha, thanks, guys! Glad you like. This was once the way I actually felt. Someone has since changed my mind

Hmmm