Hi everyone,

I just found this site & was interested in getting some opinions for my latest 'creation' It's a little cheeky but not what I'd call explicit & written to suit the rock genre. Appreciate all feedback. TIA

TIME’S UP

Leave me panting, out of breath
So insatiable, its life or death
Craving an intense need for pleasure
An excitement beyond all measure
Inside a deep throbbing, a yearning
I can feel every part of me burning
Turn me on, time to call it a night
Or is your bark worse than your bite?

CHORUS:
Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to get under the weather
Time’s up, it’s now or never
Time for birds of a feather…
To ‘FLOCK’ together.

So hot it leaves me sweating
Etched, no way we’ll be forgetting
Linger above, I love the teasing
I want it to show no sign of easing
Make me come (come) closer to you
Let’s pay the devil every cent he’s due
Turn me on, time to call it a night
Or is your bark worse than your bite?

Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to get under the weather
Time’s up, it’s now or never
Time for birds of a feather…
To ‘FLOCK’ together.

BRIDGE:
Time’s up – Get on your knees
Time’s up – Do to me as you please
Time’s up – Make me scream out, beg for more
Time’s up – …..I Can’t take anymore!

CHORUS:
Time to pull yourself……… together…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to go at it hell for leather…….(Time for birds of a feather…)
Time to get under the weather
Time’s up, it’s now or never
Time for birds of a feather…
To ‘FLOCK’ together.

©Yolanda 2011