Snark Bite

If you’re asleep
I envy you
If I wasn’t scared to die
I’d want to
Would you rather spend your time
Lying awake at night?

If silence guts me all the ways
I sense but cannot see,
Then your breath behind my neck
Will be the music in my head
But when I wake will you be gone?
If it means you won't, then I hope I don't

The pictures on our wall
Are back to brighter days
When love wasn't dead
She never left in the first place
I hope she’ll let me stay
Just a little longer

If this is just another dream
I hope I die and stay here

just wondering are you going to put more, it needs something else, its too short personally, you need more imagery its a start its not bad but not really good either. keep posting you can only get better. i've read some of your other stuff, so i believe you can do better.

This is actually an interlude. It's kinda tying a lot of stuff together from the rest of the EP I got together. I can understand how it seems empty but I also edited it to the final version so hopefully it's more clear now.

Ok that makes sense actually thanks I understand now, keep writing