Oh Girl feeback please

Im just waiting for u to put ur make up on
But with u girl its worth the wait
I came in first place for the first date
Kissed at ur place landed on first base
I aint tryna push u girl
Push u right off the edge
We can dance in the rain girl
Or dance on ur bed
U know what i mean its a inuendo
Sex before marriage is it really a sin tho
Love how u hold ur head up high worry free
Not just good looks u got personality
U love me for more than my salary
Better than them girls from the valley
Them bum *****es in the alley
I give em a quarter or a penny outa pitty
U are one of a kind
Plus u aint white u one of my kind
I dont really care about the race
I like sweet and sour girls they all got different tastes
I might get hungover but not sprung
Cant talk cuz that ***** got my tounge
Cat went scratch then is said meow
Id only be in trouble if u left me now

Damn dawg. Nice rhyme

thanks