8 bars looking for feedback

I'm an, aspiring activist with some reactive fist,
nuclear punchlines that define who this rapper is.
Intellectually sound, i'm a human abacus
that spits poetry while blowin trees as I master this.
I get reactions like catalyst, positive or negative.
it don't matter it's just honestly not relevant cause
i'm up on the scorecards like Ali on Lederman's.
Just waiting to blow up like a bunch of Arab men.

rate or hate. It's whatever

Any feedback

Yo pretty sweet punchlines an it was refreshing to see you rhyme abacus with rapper is, and master this. Well done. Also Rhyming poetry with blowing trees mid sentence was an advanced strategy . Again, good job

Thanks for the feedback man. Just trying to improve and all.

yo, i like that man. Dope rhyme in my opinion. It was intreaging

Originally Posted by DuceDaMicRipper

yo, i like that man. Dope rhyme in my opinion. It was intreaging

thanks bro. Anything I could improve on though?