Rainy Day (ROCK)

Okay, one of the first songs I posted was called Rainy Day, but this is sort of a rock version of that song with entirely different lyrics. It's about how everything seems to crumble around you, even the one person you thought you could rely on, and you're wondering whether it is that bad or that maybe it's just a bad day.

Rainy Day, Part Two - Copyright © RobberBaron Enterprises 2011

[Verse]

The light begins to fade,
My trust has been betrayed,
I gave all that I had,
But you just gave me the blame

Shadows start to fall,
I waded through it all,
Now the skies are turning black,
All I see is darkness

[Pre-Chorus]

You always let me choose,
To make it my fault,
You always tried to hide your bruises,
Just to say I don't care

[Chorus]

Turns out the hole in your heart,
That you asked me to fill,
Was just an empty grave

And now you say you,
Need me but I'm,
No longer your slave

Am I going crazy,
Or is it just a rainy day?

[Verse]

Just when I began,
To forgive what you had done,
You did it all again,
There's no-where I can run

What is it that you want?
Why keep hurting me?
You're s'posed to be my saviour,
Through the rain I couldn't see

[Pre-Chorus]

You always let me choose,
To make it my fault,
You always tried to hide your bruises,
Just to say I don't care

[Chorus]

Turns out the hole in your heart,
That you asked me to fill,
Was just an empty grave

And now you say you,
Need me but I'm,
No longer your slave

Am I going crazy,
Or is it just a rainy day?

[Bridge]

Don't ask what's on my mind,
Cos you know it's what you did,
I can't leave you behind,
But sometimes I wish

You just made me feel so worthless,
And covered it up with lies,
You made me open up,
Just to ignore my cries

This is my last goodbye

[Chorus]

Turns out the hole in your heart,
That you asked me to fill,
Was just an empty grave

And now you say you,
Need me but I'm,
No longer your slave

Am I going crazy,
Or is it just a rainy day?

Now. I remember the first Rainy Day - I've still got the vocal kicking around somewhere - and I loved it. I expected to come in here and go "meh, don't fix what wasn't broke".
Annoyingly, this is awesome too!! Maybe you could do a Part One/Part Two thing, descent from the first quite mellow sadness into the anger of the rock version? Dunno, am just thinking aloud now!
Anyway, this is really good!

Aww thanks that's really made me smile Coincidentally, when I uploaded this to my blog (I have a blog now; blogs are cool) I pegged it as "Rainy Day, Part Two" so yeah, glad that worked out I've still got loads of new songs but they're lost somewhere…I don't really think I have to worry about them being too personal to upload after things like Goodbye and Let Go or How It Should've Been…anyway I'll find them and make sure they're not too terrible hopefully

Using italics is fun.