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    Haha poor Frankie <$ (american love)


    now
    you leave
    again

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    That was beautiful, Frankie! Ladies first, I'll wait

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    <$ = (not american love to me. but i get your love anyway...)

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    Quote Originally Posted by OrchestraInside View Post
    That was beautiful, Frankie! Ladies first, I'll wait
    Huh? Really? Beautiful? Thank you OI. I will go back and make BOLD my last line again!
    I must admit, however, that I was influenced by scripture on that one; so I cannot accept full credit.

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    Oh how gentlemanly...

    Quote Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine View Post
    <$ = (not american love to me. but i get your love anyway...)
    Some bri'ish love then <£££££££££££££££££££££££

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    Every time
    A tear falls
    I die

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    I die
    in the dust
    I live

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    I live
    Therefore I must
    Breathe

    EDITED!

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    Because I didnt get another eulogy today, I decided to urbandictionary.com my name. Amazing suggestions there.

    Frankie, I'm off to bed - you wont have to feel rushed


    I live
    With every breath
    you take

    Edit: hmm I quite like the sound of some of my senryu today (they may not be as image provoking as the haiku but they're quite touching emotionally) I think I'll tweet them

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    I'll cater to both of you
    Breathe
    you take my breath
    away

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    Whoa, watch out there, OI! You know the way to ladies' hearts! Pleasing two at once; very impressive!
    Suppertime for us here . . .

    Away
    With brittle promises
    Scoundrel


    P.S. No hidden message there--just what came to mind from the word "away!"
    Last edited by Frankie Jasmine; 12-18-2012 at 08:38 PM.

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    I wish. Thanks anyway

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    Scoundrel
    floats inside me
    hidden

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    Ooooo . . . "hidden" is too great a word to ignore!


    Hidden
    Beneath solid earth
    Molten sea


    - - - - -

    Would this end better with only the word "molten"? That's how I had it at first, but it felt incomplete.

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    I like it as it is. Beautiful.


    Molten sea
    teeming with our hopes
    oozing faith

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    Quote Originally Posted by OrchestraInside View Post
    I like it as it is. Beautiful.
    Thanks, OI.


    Oozing faith
    Pandemic epidemic
    Leaky boats

    . . .

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    Leaky boats
    holey hearts and souls
    you and me

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    ... I'm addicted to ATL ....


    You and me
    A pea and a bean in a
    Happy pod

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    While everybody else sleeps, I pounce!
    OI: My rhyme on page 6(?) wasn't intentional. My brain just couldn't escape from "blue sky".


    Happy pod
    slipping silver space
    I float you

    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    I float you
    garden in desert
    waiting spring




    Last edited by amaryn; 12-19-2012 at 05:04 AM.

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