Thought the new kid should write what hes got

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  1. In Ten Cities said:

    Exclamation Thought the new kid should write what hes got

    Immaculate grammar is what i hear from all
    Grotesue hair styles as i walk down the hall
    Smells of cheap perfume bring me towards
    The masses of the classes and segregated hordes

    Could i get some fries with that? And some mortification
    Perhaps a strawberry shake, with a deteriorating Nation
    Drugs in my children, Lots of poision on my addiction
    I could use a side of injustice and some wallstreet friction

    Now im not tryin to b*tch and complain
    But its hard when moneys all that makes campaigns
    Not brains just names with sent bottles of chapmagne
    Inhumane while they tell us to be quiet & mundane

    Revolt? Why id never get my hands dirty
    Id rather watch this sh*t crash like a chinese derby
    Watch it get sucked up like a starving kirby
    F*ck im grateful i wont make it past the year Twenty Thirteen

    Tell me what you think


    Just a quick jot. I wrote it down at work.
    Last edited by In Ten Cities; 02-11-2012 at 03:09 PM.
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    smoothtung said:

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    Dude you remind me a lot of me when I started out. Same style.. I see a good amount of potential is say, keep writing dude
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    tackpic_47 said:

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    It went hard....and it had meaning..something worth listening too....NICE!
    Rhymes-fade....Only the fans bring them back to life!