Blood In Your Name

I take your religion
Make your gods my own
Now they are evil
See what I've shown?
Folow me, brother
Down the path of peace
I embrace you with a knife in your back
When nonbeleiving doesn't cease

Benevolent Set
Is now the serpent of lies
The Holy Mother
Is a w***e that cries

I lift my blade to cut him down
One above erases my shame
My friend, my enemy
His blood in Your Name!

Come know things with me
But this knowlegde I forbid!
Eradicate! Eradicate!
From this world it must be rid!
I will not be moved by anger
I will not resist, I will not fight
For this, you must die!
My violence makes me right!

Benevolent Set
Is now the serpent of lies
The Holy Mother
Is a w***e that cries

I lift my blade to cut him down
One above erases my shame
My friend, my enemy
His blood in Your Name!

I always love you all
I always love this land
We'll see how much you love
When your heart's in my hand
I try to be something better
I strive to leave this behind
You will not get away!
I'll peel off your rind!

Benevolent Set
Is now the serpent of lies
The Holy Mother
Is a w***e that cries

I lift my blade to cut him down
One above erases my shame
My friend, my enemy
His blood in Your Name!

Seems like a pretty bold statement on politics/religion to me. Am I anywhere near what you were aiming for? That aside, not a bad set at all. The biggest thing I would suggest is paying attention the flow and rhythm of the words. I noticed that while the flow was good for the most part, the lyrics might benefit from adding or removing some parts to make the rhythm a little more fluid.

Originally Posted by Sewn Up

Seems like a pretty bold statement on politics/religion to me. Am I anywhere near what you were aiming for? That aside, not a bad set at all. The biggest thing I would suggest is paying attention the flow and rhythm of the words. I noticed that while the flow was good for the most part, the lyrics might benefit from adding or removing some parts to make the rhythm a little more fluid.

I'd definitely second this statement. Very bold which I respect and enjoy. Taking a step against the grain can always turn some heads. For better or worse, it's a powerful statement.

Some choice of words I like. They add power to your song and your message. I don't know why, but I'm loving the use of the word benevolent. It's not over used and it's a powerful word that shines through and adds some 'oomph' to your song. good deal man. nice job.

Thank you!