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    Default New song comment plz

    Read and comment plz



    Lyric*


    Leave me here to be*
    Leave me here to be what your not
    Something inside me wants to forget
    Who you are*
    What you are
    Inside

    But how can we see
    All the things*
    We will never see
    What they turn out to be
    everything we are
    Everything your not
    Everything that keeps us apart

    You left me here to be
    You wanted me to see*
    What is real in your mind
    But you didn't think I cause see past your lies
    You told me to trust your soul*
    How do I,*If that's what you call a soul

    How can See*
    All the thing
    We will never see
    What they turn out to be
    Everything we are*
    Everything your not
    Everything that keeps us apart

    How can I see
    How can I see
    How can I see

    How can See*
    All the thing
    We will never see
    What they turn out to be
    Everything we are*
    Everything your not
    Everything that keeps us apart

    How
    Can*
    We
    See

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    The message sounds like "How can there be a future between us if you're not going to be who you say you are?" right? I appreciate how simple and to the point it is, and not unnecessarily insulting. It sounds well thought out too. That's good.

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