New song in progress needs work but tell me how it is so far

Thread: New song in progress needs work but tell me how it is so far

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  1. Matt6660 said:

    Default New song in progress needs work but tell me how it is so far

    Lyric


    Psychopathic killa is all you be
    Never*
    You lay your hands on me and you'll see
    Forever
    All you do to fate is all you see in hate
    Forever

    You act like you knew it all along
    But you never saw it coming*
    You never saw it coming
    Till it was to late*

    Psychopathic killa is all you be
    Never*
    You lay your hands on me and you'll see
    Forever
    All you do to fate is all you see inhate
    Forever

    Now what do you see
    You thought you'd get to me
    You never thought this till it was to late
    What do you see
    What do you see
    What do you see
    Thought you'd come after me
    Thought you'd make me see*

    Psychopathic killa is all you be
    Never*
    You lay your hands on me and you'll see
    Forever
    All you do to fate is all you see in hate
    Forever

    Now it to late*
    Time has come
    Only thing left is gone
    What do you have left*
    Nothing




    Thanks for reading plz comment
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    I guess this is a rap song. I understand your nihilism. But there must me some positive things in life, something to work with.
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    Na man it a metal song. It's far from rap.