my lyrics- battles

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  1. dahotshotda said:

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    We pick up our shield and pick up our sword
    There's no where to run we all hale our lord
    Blood,bones,wounds we all have to see
    But theres no running away its our destiny

    Pride and glory we all shall be praised
    We all know that this is how legends are made
    For the king we shall die with no regrets
    Leaving a legacy for our
    children to follow our footsteps
    If god has mercy and lets us live another day
    It is certainly because we all have prayed
    The only thing we trust in war is our strengh and power
    But we know that we all can be dead within the hour


    We pick up our shield and pick up our sword
    There's no where to run we all hale our lord
    Blood,bones,wounds we all will see
    But theres no running away its our destiny

    Before charging we all shout our kings name
    He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
    We are the soldiers that are dying
    But he has no shame
    Counting the victories and getting all the fame
    United and together we fought all the wars
    Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
    Calling the men to come out and fight
    Help them unite with god and see the white light

    We picked up our shields and picked up our swords
    There's no where to run we all hailed our lord
    We won and got our glorious victory
    Battle of troy it was called, we made history
     
  2. steveonomics said:

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    Before charging we all shout our kings name
    He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
    We are the soldiers that are dying
    But he has no shame
    Counting the victories and getting all the fame
    United and together we fought all the wars
    Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
    Calling the men to come out and fight
    Help them unite with god and see the white light


    This has to be my favourite verse in this song. Very visual and makes one think. I like it.
     
  3. dahotshotda said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by steveonomics View Post
    Before charging we all shout our kings name
    He stands behind us and thinks its all a game
    We are the soldiers that are dying
    But he has no shame
    Counting the victories and getting all the fame
    United and together we fought all the wars
    Yelling and screaming banging on the doors
    Calling the men to come out and fight
    Help them unite with god and see the white light


    This has to be my favourite verse in this song. Very visual and makes one think. I like it.
    thanks
    i also really liked the end part
    but did you notice the part in the end after that ? that it says it was the battle of troy ? a lot of people dont bother looking at it becuase its the end of the song
    im thinking of changing the last part so ppl will read it
    what do you think ?
     
  4. steveonomics said:

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    Maybe, you could title it The Battle of Troy and just um maybe change the last part. Just a thought, but really really good writing.
     
  5. rashid.martin123@gmail.co said:

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    This is really good i like it