Please review 4 me; Be BRUTAL

My clocks broken but I hear the tick
I'm a magician but I dont have a trick
I cant take medicine even though Im sick
They say Im slow but Im quick

The windows closed but I feel the breeze
Im getting stung but there aint no bees
Im locked inside with a ring full of keys
A blind man is certain of what he sees

Out of the dark there comes a light
That darkens my mind; blinds my sight
Makes me see the black as white
I dont need wind to fly a kite

I hear music but I can never listen
To the words that shine but never glisten
Like shooting stars that have never risen
Out of the sky; an endless prison

Poison heals; a sweetened remedy
Its now a friend; never was an enemy
Its these things you keep telling me
The question is when will you begin to see

That green is blue and blue is always red
That no one listens to anythig youve said
You're talking to statues; theyre brain dead
Theye been vomitting all theyve been fed

That politics is a play and the worlds a stage
For nations to act and invoke the rage
Of corrupt directors; tryin to get thier wage
By making movies; thats thier golden age

The worlds a mirror; out to show us all
Whether you stand short or really tall
Just make sure that you dont take a fall
Cus youll fall fast and lose it all

could be way off here, but from the first line i get you're damaged, but there are still working pieces of you scattered about.

ok sure,
but like how is it in terms of quality i guess

quality? definitely up there with some of the better stuff i've read on the site.