your flow's pathetic, no repenting, go regret it.
you don't know dope, don't go boasting ethics.
I'll write about the ethic and apply it like I'm aristotle.
you represent an essence in the sense of "plastic" models.
were those themes even meant for me..? Idoleyes my site when pupils are effigies.
presence and energy; lessen the lethargy before the rest get sent to sleep.
"benz"..? I've got a better dream.. I went to sleep on benzedrine.
I just touched on the flaws of seven 'cees.. better bet I'll get the 'benz'; I'm extra deep.
simple statements.. vindicate the vindications..
guy-know you could get sick with patience.
preach "peace" to me? it's like kissing a dentist.
I'd push you away and bring pain like I meant it.
I've got the better ethics, I'm adamant..
front and regress steps, get "backstabbed" by accident.
I swear I'd never ever intend to "backstab" rappers..
I was just sharpening wits as fam ran backwards.
panic like the 'language died' but my raps smacked it back to life.
deep? please, a sinkin ship.. sin:kinship, this is fratricide.
I mean, if you're Able, consider this fratricide;
be "at peace" with the concept of battle rhyme.
you're probably the type to commit matricide
squabbling in a fight over mattress sides.
chatt fraff and rant that I "backstab"
just be ghost, you've got nothin tu pack-man.
the worst author's worth more than Sir Folsom..
even peaceful cees' disagree that the serf's awesome.
I hate on bland rappers coz I've got love for battlerap.
..when testing perspectives consider it parallax.
that's unlikely, "love"s hard to beat
..but Aphrodite lusts after me.
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I control V'.. Smoothtung just copies..
the rest lack consistancy ..their stuff's sloppy.
what fam? stop that.. Robb Mack's not bad..
respects me more than himself and I mock that.
ey yo, Robb Mack.. you lay low in combat..
the type of vet' that'd get his whole squad trapped.
I flipped it since pog caps, I ripped it since rom hacks..
I'm O.G.. you just 'owe g's like you robbed crack.
who here remembers ..Molotova? ..Skndeep?
-the kind of tight emcees that the script needs.
I left site for a couple of months and it missed me..
I returned to a few swung punches that.. missed me.
I'm coldest, so bring hot flows like you.. mist me.
if I rhyme like with like there's a twist, see..
yall common pop rappers yet never get hits seen.
kid, please.. yall spit seed like sick trees.
In brit speak a whole load of 'tree' gets you 'spinney'.
please.. you're big weeds.. so go feed from s*** creek.
..y'all drop dry stuff or just rusty? ..s*** creaks.
Quickill's got a 'doctorate'..? 'B**** Please'.
Tre staggered back but he aint battle rapping..
neither are most of you.. truth, you lack the tactics.
..serving any fishy in-bred like a salmon sandwich.
I got game, a hunter. you couldn't even catch a cabbage.
a new era like tricks rabbit-on and caps'll vanish.
I go over 'cees.. I put the 'ATL' in transatlantic.
this is dedicated to all the undeserving..
fine, whine.. but yall are under serving.
try to apply time to writing something worth it,
before you go to post, check your mothers' verdicts,
write a hundred verses.. I'll just come an burn it..
run with your tales tucked; fake cats and gutter vermin.
post-redemption, token efforts.. consider this an open letter..
I'll keep on beating the weak whilst I hope for better.
We lost 'Nostik'.. we lost a lot of real rap..
now we've got 'Logix' instead? I don't 'feel that'..
so go take the blame if it seems like I've no heart..
nowadays Im the only one here to 'Go Hard'..
but yall master 'bait'; I like my own bars.
hey Quick'.. not so fast..
roam past.. this is my empire.
yall camp and not hot. tend fires.
no damn threats since Zarex left, it's kinda like the type's elusive..
you're tired crews with minor music.. If I lied, reply and try to prove it.Last edited by _SBU; 11-09-2012 at 03:22 PM.
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whats a sheep doin specifications without current objection....the words hit harder than a viagra erection
Originally Posted by _SBU
but thats on my apparent reflection and due process of inspection...if you step in shi* then wipe it off on your section
vindication holds not appreciation when the victim holds hesitation...so my level is unknown elevation, you have no relation just mistrusted elation
ill try my best to consider your consideration from a broke nation...im afraid my style create deprivation to your worthless creation, stick to stylistic masturbation
fratricide is the word of a man with dictionary in one hand and **** in the other...elemental seizure dear eboneezer usin more dead words blows your cover
its time to burn, no infernos in sight or smoking rubbers...well maybe not tires but I leave a soulless trace and grieving mothers and a dic to smother
you hate on any that is better or apparently can handle their own...whats the difference when you never leave the safety of home
that is the kind of assumption that left you strugglin from start...got ahold of smoking purely pure in the purest purity, im afraid not that smart
the worst author is boldly claims from a silly boy name....no need to even murder the weak when you can just speak and leave you maim
get a crew to back up the foo instead of believing in you...the shoe doesnt fit on either foot, standing in a chimney youll only discover soot
I came to just simply pass bytime and maybe inspire a quarter for a dime...but hard to ignore the slippery when they cant leave their slime
too commit a murderous frat, your not worthy of mankinds stat....love cant be beat like a dic on a toilet seat, ten toes and on a pc your 7 feet, your not cold your just sleet
could easily spit out vocab of the 18th century and read you some poe...too bad id rather just kill your infliction and feed some raven and crow
your buzzard mind and lizard depth got you on a sunken ship....lost words and classifications of social status really arent that hip
only plastic I could be compared to you, is the polymer frame on the 223....we got the same similarities and help the false become free
you could be worth of exclamation if you lost the lesser provocation....your mind is slaved with automation, let me be your cerebral emancipation proclamation
thats right ill be the lincoln to your benz dreams, its time to cut the seams...im a lyrical tyrant and ur lettin off steam, a stink pus* who only likes their own cream
ill end this with your basic style of self admiration and parallax .... im cold cut steel no matter the angle, your lost but claim vision but everyone sees the cataracts
Nice lines man, I enjoyed the depth for sure. Not the usual competition at all, love the depth and challenge
Take Care -
haha you brought me back to ****in pogs man, I remember them shits like its yesterday. I dont know what any of us was thinking about it being "cool". I remember collecting them slammers and slicers like i was going to take on a cardboard god or something.
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Someone come at me *****es <3
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Ahah, welcome back man. I did just come at you though.. Originally Posted by Zachre
My last drop was addressed to "yall", no footnote saying that Zachre's exempt. If you want to come back at that one I'll write a drop that's more specific to you.
Thanks man, I'm feeling your lines and your sportsmanship for sure. Originally Posted by sirfolsom
Incase anyone isn't aware- my battle rhymes are not to be taken as balanced critique in any way. I only ever battle those I have genuine respect for. -
I just figured you wouldn't want any of this... Hahah Originally Posted by _SBU
I see you listing emcees, well listen to me. Originally Posted by _SBU
The list isn't complete until I claim my seat
And your pain and grief leaves you six feet deep
Its Sickening to see the sickness in me
As I deliver to thee a bacterial disease
By spitting something so venomously
Then we will see, who reigns supreme
Cus for you it was like B.I.G, all a dream
Living up to your name, starting to underscore
Once I run this game, You'll be underworld
So call me hades, and say hey to these nuts
Follow my ways and maybe you'll not suck.
Don't mind how bad that was... I'm on adderall so y creative abilities aren't there... Hahaha -
Why compare molos skillfull ways and skndeep's.
The vacant pair saw my triple ace through ripped sleeve.
I roam the coast; Chris is only safe on six seas.
I'll shark him scrape the surface til it makes the fin bleed.
Chris; never making it.. Always debating with..
Wether or not clever thought is a taste of his.
Sore like a tendon in the nook of a masons wrist.
Drawn to reflection when looking for face to kiss;
Freights for a place to live. Vagrant snitch; kids a lot.
Scripts of mine are stronger than cable grips; his are not.
Slicker drops form from the but of a faucet head.
Skills are topped if he sucks thought through the bottle neck.Last edited by smoothtung; 11-12-2012 at 12:10 PM.
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Yawn...
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I live in nyc...so the hurricane is on my mind...not related to anyone, but hopefully this starts to give this forum a pulse again....
There’s a storm brewin’
Off the coast comin’ in
It’s movin’
Feel the wind
And what it’s throwin
Like my words
Whippin’
It’s rainin’
Torrential downpour hatin’
Can’t escape
The devastation
That I bring
Storm Vouve
Eye witness news
trackin’
my Every move -
V hoping it all stays well and good...hurricane winds closed down the mortuary understood?
that means ill save that *** from a 16 bar one eight seven...trust me all doggies dont eat or go to heaven
the benevolence of my intolerance is false perception....we all need hearts to worry about the starving no misconception
yeh storms brew n go but misdirected inception...leaves your brain's vision lookin the wrong direction
its hard for corrections to show correction...especially under false presumption or slander are pure infection
sometimes death is simply not deaths selection...he is forced to knock time 2 time takin your soul and your stickin like resin
lifes a mean villain who needs no impressin .... constantly withered minds claimin they give blessins
some worry about eatin dirt, us americans complain of salad dressin...my son didnt make the soccer team seems to be the current catholic confession
if you think we arent brain washed, enjoy inception....youll never get caught for going backwards in moral detection
brands,politics,corporations pays for bad lessons...priest savin your spirit but youth their molestin
our us currency is pure **** at rock bottom but no stressin...if you think im playin derivatives is the answer my evidence and logical impression
if any 3 letter gang knock its instant failure no testin...bullets leave them the deep body massages with no caressin
in your streets,home,neighbors, and brain is where their infestin...profits was their game and controlling the majority is their current obsession -
'cash'you' get will never be much.. Originally Posted by Zachre
'haze'll' clear after shells are heaped up..
even 'pee'can' seem to flow golden, please bust..
keep up, you're defunct as G Funk. "Deez Nuts".
you get less "sick" with it, yet never get better..
if the theme's "bacterial disease", I'm edward jenner..
I'd measure "venom" to sell 'em as remedies..
'Hey'deez' nuts corrupted persephone.
Z's a sheep, seems asleep when he writes stuff.
Z needs "venom" when the adder'all hyped up.
lyrics with substance.. consider this my drug.
high on life, plus.. pipes blunts and white dust. -
Vouve your style is very played and very much unimpressive. I'm down to respect a fellow writer but only ones who treat 'battle rap' with genuine respect. Originally Posted by Vouve
So in other words; you are very awful. -
winds'll whip as drizzle hits. a lyricist..? consider this: Originally Posted by Vouve
whether chatting breeze keeps your n.y state of mind in a twist.
..my reign awaits kinda like it's money saved for sunny days.
you pushin a brother to end you like you'd hurry'Cain.
get left for dead with fresh regrets and neverending mental stress.
..I'll sit and summon up a Storm like I'm Professor X.
I'm bringing truth.. in eye witness news:
'apparently a tragedy' -it's like his review. -
damn wheels callin up the storm was raw as hell now let me feast....taking out the lower levels and magnets but dont need the beast
cause therefore I am the elements combined throughout time....no junk in my dna is beating the plagues, even my immune system is commitin crimes
maybe a legion or darkness needs no companions but power in force...that means those who are only sharp can get their edge roughed up against coarse
the ones who needs savin is past baptisin or cleansin of soul...im a 80s baby but my carbon intellect is more productive than coal
mental murders and frontal lobe rapes, leaves in the planet of the apes...making the fruit tossers squash their grapes,break old tapes,the real knight needs no cape
not trying to go with the masses into odorless gasses without a full chamber...many cling to life and tragedies but god damn they cant even name her
nature has so many forms and hardly leaves previous traces...this is what men live for and never truly embraces
financial gains, **** stains, false substains, live for life my only remain.....leave staffs for dames, never enjoyed games, the wild will not be tame, falsehood is fame
Just a little something for the mmhmm value haha
haha you killed me on that xmen reference sbu, dedicated my first line to that, im sure you will pick up on that though -
Merchants of indifference
This is it, can't take it
Thank god for the second Amendment
cause I got the right to bear arms
and I am comin' on,
Hot Bullets flyin'
Like the dum-dum you invented
For tha indi-ahns
Gin and tonic,
Go fetch it, *****
Or else this hollow point
Is gonna hit yo' chest,
Better it did, fcking imperialist
merchant of bullsht
But now the sun did set
On the British empire, nothin' left
But a relic, queen elizabeth
And the son, bleeding from every-thun
Hemophilia is the price of privillag-uh
like an inbred sperm carryin' on it’s task
never knowin’ it fires blanks,
Against the dum dum mass… -
Merchant of death knock knock like a tum tum on your doorstep...this is what happens when you face war mongers without prep Originally Posted by Vouve
you should know better than to just post witha half step.....your words are not heard like a boat in the bermuada, eyes patches no depp
i call that a johnny 2 step or redo the entire self depth n delivery...gentlemans are for suckers, you take one lick to your center for chivalry
how can I be so cold and so hot rather than not, its self caught....chris hanson would hide under the bed, predator in motion no bein caught
my intellect and flow is priceless and im seeing your store bought...tie you up pretzel with a bad taste in my mouth bunch of lines 4 you id rather naught
or wait a minute the naughty for knot, did u get the plot?....in hell i will watch the weak rot, ill be with myself the crew of mot, and burning bots
sharpen ur sword when you try to battle regions of a dark lord...murder should be prevented just cause you was bored, new words needed not stored
food for thought and youd leave your family starving and crying....a fixer upper,your wear is not tupper, either rebuild or just start admiring
ending of the point is your hollow, empty lyrics HO just swallow...even leaders will follow, wheres that kid, who? oh wait we are still lookin for waldo -
Man... Originally Posted by sirfolsom
I'mma lofty rapper
Lyrics go hard like a ****in' velociraptor
A collasel smasher, I write the final chapter
Your over lame rhymes're like nice try's from nice guys
I grill ATL rappers like french fries from Five Guy's
You're a fat **** like Danny Devito from Wise Guys
Don't even step in my turf you get blinded like Left Eye
Rest in piece, to all those deceased
Now lemme grab my piece while you join with ease
Ha
Hold up... lemme scroll up and read the lyrics of this rapper
He sounds like a fairy that didn't get his happy ever after
Talkin' bout a "tum tum", this mother****'s dumb son
I'm done before I read the rest of his **** and lose an IQ point, **** it what's the point
Why waste my time on this amateure rappers I'd rather chunk the deuces and go roll a joint
... ya dig??? -
raptors,trex's,and witty lines are all extinct,you got trouble ur only answer is the precinct....nine won won, 11 bullshits can double lose in the sun
text scrolling and ***** eye swolling, the bridge needs no trolling......losing points you never attained, from your judgement i obtain, lion with no mane
if you write chapters, im the one they name it after, sayin my name ur teeth chatter, striking out with no batter, i remain intact, your high off of contact
you see whats your doin, in deaths chase but still pursuin, purse snatch ur not foolin, if im spittin your droolin, take the day off your ferris buellin
godzilla in the thrilla in manilla, on ice with no vanilla, banana clutchin but you aint a gorilla, fold you up envelop your manila, i can tell through words ur a bleeda
lefteye are you needin some tlc, aaliyah and ted kennedy, crashed easier from what I see, inbred wouldnt claim family, organic bat n balls for u no strike 3, misery
Im gonna die fast but never from a quick illness, unborn attention call your mind baby stillness, fishing is your only outlet for catchin reelness,baby birdness
but i guess your thinking about the nest, i see the touchable elliot ness, i think your the dik under the dress, shi* in ur pants is better than ur mess
you couldnt grill a flammable bill, fear and death is what I instill, ooops I mean install, misery hotline would reject your call, all engines runnin and you stall
tryin to keep my vocab on lower rehab, chemistry sets in the wrong lab, your sticken like easters slab, or uhh maybe like custers scab, gossip is ur gab
its no gift, being slow and dreamin swift, guitar solos couldnt catch my rift, homerun intentions playin with the whif, full bats on insects, pus** is what i suspect
i dont need no hello kitty, with wrinkles not lines aint so pretty, suckin down the commit, tee off with no fair, way of the dog, smokebombs vs ocean fog
you see how i broke up, your simple choke up, without takin a toke up, i dont think youd know burn if u smoke up, upside frogs never croak up, come in my domain towel you better soak up, invisibility i see with ur cloak up, australians would make u put ur bloke up, rally the pep see me fizzin so coke up, mahogany high grain put the oak up, half dubs under par I only see the stroke up, lights with no color are worse behind than fairy tale folk up, cracked birds for dozen put ur yolk up, turn ur ignorance down and decibel revoke up, batman goggles balance my nut budget with no ledgers ur jokes up,heath with candy bars n ambien dreamin need 2 wake up,
shake my snake, at the jake, killin innocents fault ur mistake, catfish's belong in the lake,sweet tooth cookies n cake, tits is the only good fake, frosted tigger i head n shoulders ur flakes, double punchlines like tyson skippin ur stake, twice is the lesson u need 2 brakes,lines you air is scat tic tac couldnt help that, murder he wrote in this paragraph no more chit chat, spinal tap floatin rift raft, water snakes come even bet u wouldnt spit that, huggies for ur shi* thats been shat -
"Very" Much? Originally Posted by smoothtung
Very Much Hilarious
To use Such A Meaning-luss
Word as this
It's touches on
The difference
Between us
You, the hypocrite
Me, the b;tch,
That won’t let off this scent
It stinks of another's genius
So Devious the plan to steal it
Verbatim lyrics
Such a lazy plagiarist
With no alibi,
No Disguise,
No Apolog-eyes
Just Jehst lines
Or a"New York State of Mind"
Lies, these ain't your rhymes,
So you got no right
To call me out on mine
The product of my own mind
And even if I tried
can't pass another's off as mine
That's pride,
So battling? Who are you kiddin'?
When you be sneak thiefin'
Anythin' you can sneak in
