Ten feet from destruction

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  1. Erica1997 said:

    Default Ten feet from destruction

    Give me strength when all the pain is gone
    Give me the courage to keep holding on
    Take away my fears
    Lift away the years
    Keep me ten feet from destruction
    Break my heart in two
    Let me learn to lose
    But lord, don't leave me lonely

    You can have every last part of me
    Every cell and every breath I breathe
    Let them steal my dreams
    Let them run their rings
    But give me the one thing I need
    He can wipe away my tears
    He can brush away the fears
    That have been hiding in my heart for so long

    Cut me open
    One step at a time
    But give me the faith
    To keep love alive
     
  2. jailhouserock said:

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    I like it, is this one that you wrote or do you have the author? Would be pretty cool to read some more, thanks for sharing.
     
  3. realermakeyafeelher said:

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    Too lovey dovey 4 me! but u got some balls to post that sh**!!!! Jus' an opinion
     
  4. Erica1997 said:

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    This is actually something I wrote personally, though I believe it needs a lot more work
     
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    _Nostik_Go_Hard said:

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    This is a real well written piece. I can see some emotion going on the script, I like it.
     
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    dark1979 said:

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    Definitely interesting, Your
    style is beautiful and I'm not good in English, but I
    understand all your words. "your soul is so
    beautiful thank you Erica1997"