First of all, I don't know if this is the right place to post this , so if I put it in the wrong place, feel free to correct me
These are the lyrics to a song I translated from spanish, so I would like you to tell me what do you think about the lyrics and correct me if I made mistakes (grammar is not my thing xD)
I’d lie
I don’t dare to remember,
I don’t dare smiling,don't dare to be happy
'Cause I'm afraid of loosing my head again,
I've already lost it for you
You,that make me hide my heartbeats under skin,
Don’t wanna bother you
But I'm starting to get mad,
I feel like I've got nothing..
And I burst because I know
That I love you even though you're
doing fine without me
I'd lie if I said that I don’t think about you
Knowing that you hide your heart makes me wanna die
And I lie again, saying that I will never be the one who finds it
Cause thinking makes me wanna die
When I sleep I dream that
The moon illuminates your skin
Embraced next to me..
But no, I wake up and you're gone
The pillow is eating me up
And I start remembering..
the reality is killing me
I'll forget to forget you
I wanted to try, but I failed
I feel like we’re growing apart
By every step I make
I walk around nude in the solitude
When I reach for you and you're not here
Let me burst the horizon of the future
Giving the dream a chance
With the strokes I made for you