"Fool" -- Spare time piece of work.

Thread: "Fool" -- Spare time piece of work.

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  1. TheBenji said:

    Default "Fool" -- Spare time piece of work.

    Hey guys, for the past few days I've been working on this song in my spare time, now I know it needs tons and tons of work but hopefully it'll be decent one day, any will be greatly appreciated

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    I didn't think I could survive,
    Without you by my side
    Oh boy was I wrong
    Because to me you're invisible
    You're gone.
    Let the chatter die and the friendship end
    Because now it's like we're in a BBM
    Our messages never send
    Said you were just following the trend
    To stay cool
    But now you've left me,
    Left the fool

    But yet I still try to make it work
    But I'm a shadow, left to lurk
    Remain unnoticed by your eyes
    How this started from a lie
    So now, left here, lone, to cry
    The little shy boy, left to die.

    Thought I had you figured out
    Liked to stay calm
    No need to shout
    But then you went and played your games
    And our friendship went up in flames
    Do we talk a single word
    Or is it left for the humming bird
    The little birdie left to die
    Hear no words, hear no cries.

    {VERSE 2}

    I remember when I added you on BBM
    You were my friend, no more to recommend
    But you've played me for your tool
    Because you think you're just too cool
    Now you begin to lose your rule
    Because
    You're not my master
    I'm not your plaster
    I'm not protecting you no more
    So prepare for bareback gore
    To arrive at your door

    Because now my weary eyes
    Are staring into starry skies
    Surrounded by fireflies,
    But the nights full of lies
    The night full of cries
    Soon the night is to die
    So prepare for sunrise
    Light beams into my eyes
    And I realiseeeeeeeee


    {CHORUS}

    I'm not a fool
    I'm not your tool
    You have no rule
    Count your breaths
    You're in a drowning pool
    I was your big possession
    Used to be your obsession
    But now it's the end of the lesson
    I'm no longer messin'.

    I thought I spoke your language
    I thought -- I was your bandage
    Protected you from all damage

    {VERSE 3}

    Do you really think it's fair
    To mock people with spots
    And messy hair
    Because your type aint rare
    So there's no need to share
    *straight into next line followed by different beat*

    Your violence, your thoughts
    Because we all know you were taught
    To dominate the short
    The ones bad at sport
    When they fight back you just snort
    And run away
    You're afraid to play that game
    Because that's not the way you roll
    Not the way you go
    You're just that low
    Last edited by TheBenji; 03-15-2012 at 02:51 PM. Reason: Correctionss